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Water Lily


Water Lily
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Copyright: Kyle Shelton (wkshelton) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1605 W: 0 N: 674] (8572)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-07
Categories: Nature
Camera: Canon 20 D, 24-105 4L IS
Exposure: f/4, 1/60 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2007-11-25 6:01
Viewed: 767
Favorites: 2 [view]
Points: 138
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Water lily from a pond close to my house in Pensacola florida.
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Hi Kyle - I really like the presentation here. The white lily stands out so well amongst all that blackness and the flower itself is nice and sharp. Good control of the whiteness as well. Nice shot.

Really fantastic sharpness and clarity. Love the BG and off-centering composition. Great job!
TFS

hello kyle!
excellent photo with great light and sharpness.
wonderful !
tfs
zoran

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  • juyona Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2390 W: 0 N: 770] (12756)
  • [2007-11-25 6:18]

Genial trabajo Kyle,
sobresalientes detalles y compo...
espléndido efectos,
saludos

Hello Kyle!
Beautiful simply!
Wonderful flower! Nice details - drops...
Bravo!
TFS, regards, Zorica

Wonderful lighting. Very poetic image. Good wrk. Regards, Jean.

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  • gnada Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2066 W: 59 N: 2115] (12737)
  • [2007-11-25 7:25]

Hi Kile...
Fantastic capture, a lovely scenery!
The water droplets are looking great, colors, the presentation...
Congratulations!
TFS
George

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  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1790 W: 65 N: 0] (16675)
  • [2007-11-25 7:56]

Hi Kyle ;)
EXCELLENT...COMPLIMENTS...less is more...
Best regards,
J ;)

REALLY nice shot Kyle! I love the flower isolated in the Black BG! Very nice details, soft tones! Really excellent drops! I love it!
Linda
B-)

Hello Kyle,

The starkness and simplicity of this shot is what makes it so powerful! There are no distractions, nothing to remove the concentration from this single, sharp, detailed image!

My compliments!
Bev :-)

Many thanks for your warm comments on 'Radiance in October'.

Ho yes! A good idea!
I admit i see two way who could inspire me... That way you did is excellent with all that black around.
Another way in close-up were we can see it big and full of detail could be very of interest too!
I enjoy the way some green remain just enough to make we guess the shape of the stalk of it :)

Beautiful!! I think you have chosen for the right background in PP. Really great sharpness!
Those drops are magnificent!!

Well done
Janneke
ps. I did a workshop to show something

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  • Tomek Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1185 W: 35 N: 1970] (11236)
  • [2007-11-25 10:58]

Hello Kyle:)
WOW!!!! this is so nice... I love it:))) great that you made BG black neutral, lily look more than pretty:)
Tom:)

hi kyle,
excellent !
like the empty black space in here.
perfect sharppness and clear details of the lily.
an amazing lighting.
an artistic and beautiful composition !
TFS carole

hello Kyle
Magnifique présentation et netteté
Composition artistique Que te dire de plus
Félicitations et merci
amitiés

jojo

Hi Kyle,
What a superb macro shot.Excellent sharp, colours and light.Well done.TFS.
Regards.

hAyAti

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  • boonie Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1160 W: 42 N: 1162] (5826)
  • [2007-11-25 14:32]

Kyle
Super contrast between the lily and the black BG. Lily's kind of "float" in the water and your seems to be floating in the frame. Neat
Hope you had a great Thanksgiving with family and friends.
Dan

Hello Kyle!
Very very good detail and wonderful black backgroung, but your perspective is not exactly my taste (in this shot)...but image quality is PERFECT!
Best regrads!
Lili

Hi Kyle,
A masterpiece.
Wonderful...
Selahattin E
Its my favorite

Hello Kyle,
A pleasant composition!
Great details in the delicate flower, the petals come out very well and the colours are amazing...
Macro work is skilfully done, simplicity rules!
Greetings,
Pablo -

Hi Kyle,
Your water lelies are is stunning! This one is no exception! Great choice of the black BG. Perfect presentation of the delicate white flower with the water droplets as pearls. Super posting I wil add this one to my favorites.
Hans

:) Later....

Hi Kyle,

This is an outstanding image . . Fantastic presentation . .
I thought was fake flower, but this is perfect!
Well composed . .

Tfs,
Tjutjut

:-)) will be back to you

Hello Kyle,
The bedewed lily is beautifully framed against a dark b/g. Bravo! Regards, Danilo

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  • Silke Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3300 W: 267 N: 6202] (23100)
  • [2007-11-26 5:57]

Outstanding composition, colours and details.
I love the dramam here

TFS
silke
P.S. Thanks for your kind words on my "Chilly Chilies"

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  • ttreen Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1567 W: 118 N: 3550] (14211)
  • [2007-11-26 6:06]

Hello Kyle
Very nice details on the Lilly.. Wonderful BG makes the white stand out even more...

Tricia

Hi Kyle,
Lovely composition and great shot of this flower, excellent Point od view and well presented, very sharp and nice colors on a dark background, very well done.
Michel

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  • milas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2100 W: 379 N: 2059] (22110)
  • [2007-11-26 8:13]

merhaba myfriend Kyle;
excellent photo with great light and sharpness.
wonderful !
selamlar

Hi dear friend,
in my opinion, a white beautiful flower with water droplets on it and in a good light looks great on a perfect simple black BG. Well done! I like it very much!
Best wishes,
Ioana

Hi Kyle, simple and splendid composition with wonderful flower, great light and good colors, lovely drops, very well done, ciao Silvio

Hi Kyle
The very good workmanship but the flower are getting lost in black. He is sorting frames.
Anna

Hi Kyle!
Wonderful.No more words.
Cheers.
Cezar

Very well done Kyle. Good colour and detail in the flower and it sits proudly in all that blackness. TFS,
David

Many thanks for your comment on ‘Clearing Fog’

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  • Nikas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 368 W: 2 N: 92] (1880)
  • [2007-11-28 10:49]

Hi!

Wonderful composition! I loved the colours and the drops... the background in dark is fabulouse!

Regards
ANa

Like a prewcious jewel against the black bg!
Cheers
Otto

hello kyle
Lovely white water lilly with excellent dropletss.Very beautiful especially on a black background.Well done.TFS.Greetings.
H.Ayhan.

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4095 W: 209 N: 3573] (27003)
  • [2007-11-29 3:25]

Hi Kyle

Marvellous graphism of the colorful lotus against the dark bg. Good dof & sharpness. Well done!

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2983 W: 553 N: 3289] (14608)
  • [2007-11-29 18:50]

Hi Kyle,
Very poetic image! This flower offers its petals to the light as a gift for the life! Simply beautiful! Bravo! Annie

This is really really beautiful Kyle.
I would have placed the Lily in a different position, however the beauty remains the same.
TFS
Els

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  • harpya Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5077 W: 178 N: 5961] (31727)
  • [2007-11-30 5:19]

Hello kyle

Beautiful visual, she seems to float in the space
it is wonderful this visual one!
The flower is wonderful and majestic.
Beautiful! Bravo.

Sérgio

Hi Kyle
Very artistic presentation. The image is very sharp and this touch of yellow is "magnifique".Great composition. Congrats
Serge

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  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1385 W: 122 N: 1975] (16659)
  • [2007-11-30 14:31]

Hello Kyle, very impressive shot with that very dark surrounding ! Details are crisp and the high lights are perfectly exposed. Thanks !

Mario

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  • jawa Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1658 W: 0 N: 1] (10667)
  • [2007-12-01 2:09]

Hi Kyle
very beautiful mavro.
Good dramatic.
Gr Jos
P**

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  • AJ786 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 778 W: 59 N: 1046] (6669)
  • [2007-12-01 2:13]

Hi my friend,

Amazing POV. Excellent presentation. The overall composition is magnificient...Nice PP work..

TFS

Cheers
AJ786
:-)

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  • Shogun Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 869 W: 52 N: 415] (10086)
  • [2007-12-01 8:04]

hi Kyle. impressive flower shot! great lighting and BG. the is a perfect photo. the drops, focus, tones. . . Wow! Tfs

Oggie

Hi Kyle,
Wow, this is amazing! I love the water droplets on the lily and the black around it was a great idea...so very very beautiful! Nice work!
TFS
Donna:o)

Hi Kyle

I like the way this just floats in nothing, allowing the flower to show off it's simple beauty. Lovely lighting and the water drops are wonderful

TFS

Karan

Geniales colores y detalles.
Buena presentación y excelente bg.
Saludos, JL.

Hello Kyle,

Excellent capture of this water lily.
Sharp, beautiful light.
The drops are bonus. TFS

Vandana
later

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  • lopa Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1195 W: 264 N: 877] (8915)
  • [2007-12-05 2:04]

Hi Kyle ,
Beautiful macro with great light and sharpness. I like the position of the subject.
Dark BG works here very well here.
TFS
Lopa

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  • Kiwis Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1591 W: 0 N: 173] (12253)
  • [2007-12-05 2:50]

Hi Kyle,
Excellent photo! All is perfect. I like the non center composition. great perfect job.
Regards
Diane

Hello:)
I am glad you are back - I haven't noticed this photo before - it's amazing!
Beautiful presentation, great details, nice lighting, the black background really effective.
Impressive work:)
Regards,
Izabela

Hi Kyle

Nice compositions and this is such touch of professional....superb

Amri HMS

The white water lily gives a perfect contast with the balck background. About teh position I have a little doubt
Ruud

Hi Kyle,
Beautiful composition,fantastic.Congratulation.
Best regards
Ralf

(fine art)

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  • SkyF Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1666 W: 136 N: 1263] (6138)
  • [2007-12-24 6:01]

Hi Kyle,
lovely shot, the dark BG does bring out the sharp details of the flower perfectly.
Very nice work.
Merry Christmas and Happy New year.
Sky

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  • Emma Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1500 W: 7 N: 1585] (8708)
  • [2007-12-24 8:30]

Hello Kyle,
Excelent presentation the wonderful water lily.
Merry Christmas.
Eva

Hello Kyle, wow, this is so nice! Very well captured with perfect light. Very sharp, we see very well the water droplets.
Very nice black bg.

Happy Holiday Season.

Great work! Yan
Ps: Many thx for the crit in: "Christmas Lights 2".
pl

Just stopping by to wish you and your love ones the Joyous Happy New Year...

Cheers,
Cecilia

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 890 W: 0 N: 659] (7809)
  • [2008-01-02 11:17]

10 points for the king of coastal photography,good health for 2008.
jan

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  • k-2 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 620 W: 6 N: 417] (2655)
  • [2008-01-03 19:11]

I like the lily. Interesting composition with it up top. TFS. K2

Lovely composition Kyle
excellent shot with used minimal colours
regards
Alina

This is pretty much art!!! Lovely composition with great colors and sharpness on the flower. Lovely contrast between the lily and the background.
Well done
David

hello!beauty capture!excellent macro!perfectly!tfs
Aga

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  • inaam Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1738 W: 5 N: 382] (1348)
  • [2008-01-14 9:39]

Hello Kyle,

You have presneted a charming beauty in an absolutely aesthetic sense. The image is powerful and providing a meaningful perspective. Well done my friend.

Thanks for sharing this image.

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  • nova Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2936 W: 264 N: 831] (8089)
  • [2008-01-16 18:37]

Lovely picture.The light and the composition are superb.I would have preferred to see a little bit more the stem but this is only my opinion.Beautiful sharp details.TFS
Michel

Bonjour Kyle.
Ouah... je suis très impressionné...
Magnifique photo parfaite en tout point.
Un grand BRAVO !

Hi Kyle,
My personal taste would prefer the lily being just a wee bit larger in the frame but...that's not meaning I don't like it as is. This is very attractive, very well captured, beautifully lit, great detail and is placed for a very pleasing composition. NIce shot Kyle!!

Lyndon

I just have two words for this : WOAW GREAT :)
Nothing else to add

Hello Kyle. I like your work here with water lily. The sharpness is pristine and the droplets are just stunning around the white petals. You have completely silenced the background making it looks like floating in space. Pleasantly cropped and thanks for sharing. Best regards. Jusni

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