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Photo Information
Copyright: Tracy Taylor Tietjens (TripleT) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 410 W: 1 N: 140] (3030)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-09-23
Categories: Friends/Family, Portrait
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/80 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-11-30 7:23
Viewed: 344
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
My two daughters relaxing on the deck this fall. It kind of captured their personalities, one relaxed, one somber.
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ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To appalcarp: lolTripleT 1 12-02 16:01
To tgomes: thank you!TripleT 1 11-30 17:48
To trekks: thanks!TripleT 1 11-30 10:55
To Ash249: thank youTripleT 1 11-30 09:08
To guinness_fr: thanks!TripleT 1 11-30 07:58
To JohnTulip: hello!TripleT 1 11-30 07:31
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Hello Tracy, its been a while..

Beautifully captured full of vivid colours & a super shallow DOF! I can only imagine what words could come out of the Ladies who seem to have an argument ! lol...

Well seen & composed
JohnT

a probleme of focus it seems.

you compose the image before making the focus, so the AF has got the tree behind and your daughters are blurred.

You 'd better center on one of your daughters, press the button half to focus on her, and while keeping the button pressed, recompose to have both in the picture. this way, your daughters would have been sharp and the background blured.

Hi Tracey, I agree with guiness, the BG trees are very sharp in contrast to the subjects, but in this instance it seems to work.
It's a very good image all the same, great lighting and colours.
Very nice, Gary

Hi 3T

Very interesting, picking up some good pointers here. TFS

cheers
bill

Hello Tracy,

Hello Andy,

Very good portrait. Beautiful models and colors.
TFS
Tania

Nice composition.I really like the pose of the girls.Esp the girl at the left-side though looks directly to camera,has added lot of story in this picture.
Great timing.

May be blurring the BG would make this picture more stunning.

Thanks
Nara

Another great one, Tracy! This is the one betwixt the other two I commented on. TFS This is 'the face-off.' ;)

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