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| [Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note |
| I took this photograph of a charming girl whose hair matches her freckles. She was very concentrated on her work making studies of a Mayan motif for the entry door of a Mexican Restaurant in Long Beach. I wanted to front her and take pictures but it may disturb her and she may say no. She was alone and drinking a cup of latte with the cup placed farther away. No PP except for USM sharpening and cropping. |
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I really like the subject. I always find peoples posture interesting when they are working or concerntrating hard. One thing that I find a bit distracting is the red post on the left of the image. Just a thoght... you may like to select the 'offending area' and de-saturate it a little to make it less intrusive. I hope this helps.
Lance
Very good observation and capture Andre !
The picture wouldn't have been so strong if it wasn't for the red pole. The pose, the texture of the hair and the sketchbook all add to a fine and interesting picture.
Congratulations
Trés bonne photo.
Excellent cadrage et trés bon rendu des matiéres et des couleurs.
Cette vue de dos ajoute également un mystére sympathique à l'image.
- tinman
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Well done - good pov and nicely presented - the eye finds it easy to look at. Cheers. Tim
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