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After practice


After practice
Photo Information
Copyright: Andriy Bartkiv (UkeTex) (228)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-03-15
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: iPhone
Exposure: f/2.8
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-03-15 22:47
Viewed: 290
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Beautiful spring day in Texas
A tennis practice has just finished
Balls are waiting to be picked up
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Hello Andriy!
Original geomery. Original colors. Very sophisticated work. Good luck!

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  • Ruut Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 278 W: 8 N: 33] (1261)
  • [2008-03-16 3:52]

Hi Andriy,
Like the cmposition by the dividing colored squares. It seems that the yellow balls are afraid to cross the border. Strong imagelanquage!
Well done,
Ruut

nice framing, interesting subject, i suggest a crop in WS
regards
jo

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  • Karey Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 84 W: 15 N: 67] (771)
  • [2008-05-28 2:18]
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Hi Andriy,

I like this image, it has a strong diagonal, the colours are alluring and the balls sit more or less sit to one side of the line. If you scroll down so that the net and area behind the court are gone from the image, I like it a little better. What do you think? I would call this an abstract then. Lots of your pics have an abstract feel. Cheers, Karey

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