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Alcatraz Ruins


Alcatraz Ruins
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Copyright: Renier Figuracion (kiwi_explorer) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 440 W: 19 N: 433] (2657)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2007-11-04
Categories: Architecture
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-06-13 0:59
Viewed: 264
Points: 70
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This photo was taken at Alcatraz Island, which is a National Park. The ruins at the top of the cliff was the original home of the Alcatraz military commander. When Alcatraz became a prison, James A. Johnston was the first warden to live here.
Built in 1929 in Mission Revival style, the house had 17 rooms in 3 floors with a spectacular view of San Francisco Bay. A fire gutted the house in 1970 and the ruins soon became a favorite photographic subject for the millions of tourists who visit the island every year.
In December, a powerful storm blew and toppled a block of concrete that had crowned the top of the house and opening an ominous crack across the building's front. As a result, workers had to tie down the fragile facade with ropes.

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Hello Renier!
Another great shot!
Interesting place and perfect contrast and clarity!
Lovely point of view!
Best regards!
Lili

beautiful shot of this ruins of formerly famous prison.

good note too.

TFS, Renier.
Regards
Agoes

Hi Renier...
Beautiful B@W shot...
Nice perspective...
Have a nice weekend...
Andro

Fantastic image Reiner,
excellent idea and wonderfull realisation,
great contrast and whole compo, super B&W image!
TFS

REgards!

Hi Renier,

Exelent perspective on ruins.
I love how the rocks looks in the black&white contrast.
Well done.

sabina

Hello

great b&w work. nice composition

TFS

Olivier

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  • Janone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3295 W: 84 N: 2609] (17493)
  • [2008-06-13 1:35]

Hello Renier.
Thanks for the interesting story, never heared about.
Picture looks a bit 'hars' to me.
Best regards from Jan

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  • Romeu Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 288 W: 0 N: 154] (1405)
  • [2008-06-13 2:17]

Hi Renier,

love the composition! Perfect contrast.

Congratulations my friend,
Romeu

Whew ... if they haven't made it already, there's a movie in that house! There must be some angry, angry ghosts on that island and they'll all be hearded for the Warden's house!

Good use of the b&w treatment as always, textbook composition, good sharpness.

Rew

You travel a lot my friend. Great for photo adventure. Great shot of this famous prison.
Dennis

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  • lele Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 548 W: 1 N: 241] (3920)
  • [2008-06-13 2:43]

ciao renier...bellissimo lavoro...ottima la scelta del bianco e nero...ottimi dettagli..bellissima ambientaziuone...
lele

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  • Kiwis Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1591 W: 0 N: 173] (12253)
  • [2008-06-13 2:46]

Hi Renier,
Interesting composition and note. I like the b&w choice. Your point of view is great. Good job. Thanks
Diane

great shot dear renier!

very well composed
great sharpness
very clear
good contrast

regards
js

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  • azaf1 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 574 W: 43 N: 642] (4008)
  • [2008-06-13 2:58]

Hi Renier
A place of ghosts that haunts modern memories with its history. Great POV And texture
TFS
Argiris

I'm so glad they're 'hanging on' to this bit of history. Another very beautiful b&w! TFS

Hello Renier,
Fantastic POV and a great capture. I love the black sky back the empty windows. Very well composed, great mood

Hello Renier!
Wonderful B&W photo! Beautiful contrast and details! Interesting place!
TFS, Best regards, Zorica

Hi Renier,

What can I say?
Excellent?
Superb?
Amazing?
Marvellous?

jp

Very impressive B/W picture! Rock cliff seems to be incumbent and so magic...
Contrast is really well managed.
TFS
Ciao, Antonella

Lovely tones in this one Renier and another excellent coversion. A good POV and wonderful foreground detail. TFS,
David

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4095 W: 209 N: 3573] (27003)
  • [2008-06-13 19:52]

Hi Renier

A good upward pov, with wonderful sharpness & tonal range in this superb b&w image of Alcatraz. Looks like IR. Tfs!

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  • budgun Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 307 W: 2 N: 325] (1727)
  • [2008-06-13 20:21]

Hi Renier,
Beautiful clear striking b&w image that works so well with this somber landscape.
The details to this inhospitable island vividly seen in this lovely historical image.

Regards, Tom

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  • wilth Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 226 W: 34 N: 334] (1239)
  • [2008-06-13 21:28]

So, I've been here, as a visitor, a few times and admittedly never saw this particular view of the ruin you present here.
Really captures the fairly eerie spirit and feeling of the deserted island.
Nicely done in black and white.
Good work,
TFS,
Wilt

hi renier, SF brings a glow to my soul as I have dear friends and family there, when i see alcatraz in person its bring a shiver to my spine, its such a great city too be at
a really great post,
tfs,
scott

merhaba dear renier
excellent black white composition.wonderful old house and roskys.well done.
best regards.
gürkan akçakır.

Hi, Renier!

Excellent BW work with interesting viewpoint. Nice tones and lights.

jazmin

phantastic... would like to be there once

Hello Renier
Excellent perspective and B&W colour.
Excellent composition.
Well done.TFS.
Greetings
H.Ayhan
:)

Hello Ren,
I remember the color version of this at TE. Although the blue sky is missing, the conversion to b&w is quite successful. There is good tonal range and contrast in this beautiful composition. Best regards, Danilo

Hello Renier,
Unique pov.
Beautiful composition.
Sharp, and nice tones & contrast. TFS
Vandana

Hello Renier. The position of the ruin is stunning, The contrast and saturation is brilliant. The perspective is just amazing. Very well done and best regards. Jusni

Hi Renier,
Wonderful shadow and light dance.
I like texture of rock and great composition.
Selahattin E

Hello Renier,

Alcatraz is an interesting monument over a bygone time, and not the pleasant parts..!
I like the point of view, B&W conversion is well done with contrasty tonality...

Greetings,
Pablo -

I heard some bad weather just passed Bantayan, hopefully without too much damage!

Hi Renier
It,s good to seen this ruins of old prison but on this world exist many many people who should take a "vacation" for many years there
TFS
Cheers,Braca
PS Everybody know me like "lonely tree" or "sunset" photographer ,but you have choise you for Black & Withe presenting of everithing
B&W King

A superb photo of the prison's ruins!!!
A good POV, nice contrasts, very good picture!

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