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Father's walk


Father's walk
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Copyright: Annetta Bunce (ABunce) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 167 W: 34 N: 60] (1277)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-08-04
Categories: Daily Life, Event, Portrait
Camera: Canon Rebel XTi 400D
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-06-13 20:26
Viewed: 462
Points: 0
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Looking at wedding photos here today, {I have to shoot a wedding tomorrow, always nerve wracking!} I realized I hadn't put any up for a while.

This one was last summer. I loved the location, an old ampatheater looking like ruins up a lovely canyon.

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To Kilted-Arab: Thanks!ABunce 1 06-14 08:47
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Hi Annetta - I do like the idea of this shot very much, one can only imagine the conversation between father and daughter :-)

My suggestions: closer crop to focus more on the subjects. Possibly look at a b/w conversion. Some dodge/burn pp work - big problem handling exposure with a white wedding dress and black suit, very difficult thing to handle. I've tried a workshop, hope you don't mind.

Good luck with the wedding shoot :-)

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