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Square Meal


Square Meal
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Copyright: Lisa Williams (lisapw1) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 689 W: 95 N: 1067] (5344)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-06-30
Categories: Food
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/30 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Let's Eat! [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-07-01 5:19
Viewed: 190
Points: 38
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
A square meal is a nourishing, filling meal.

In photofiltre, I added contrast, painted background black, added frame, resized and sharpened.

Eat your "three squares" today; breakfast, lunch, and dinner! :D

As always, I appreciate your comments, critiques, and workshops. Lisa

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Lisa,
Your making me hungry. Nice shot of this fine healthy meal. the composition is good and the colors and detail are nice.
Regards,
Kevin

Lisa Hi;
Wonderful clear, sharp presentation, with an excellent message. I like the framing, as well. Congratulations, very well done.
Larry
USA-tfs

This is really very good Lisa, well composed and aptly titled. I like the lighting...The frame also works very well here.
Only possible improvement that I can think of here would be that the foil wrapped cheese triangle is overexposed, maybe you could burn this in a bit.
Cheers
David

Hello Lisa

A lovely capture here, nice lighting with good DOF and a very good play on words with the title and the square plates too

TFS regards Helen

You always make me hungry...lol Is this your creation, or a restaurant?

Hi Lisa,
I'm hungry to see this picture, it's lovely!!!
Best regards Odile

you, of course, who else. I could tell a mile away. Love, janos

Great Lisa, I am hungry.
Beautiful composition and presentation.
TFS
Raimundo

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  • japiey Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1324 W: 103 N: 2310] (8724)
  • [2008-07-01 13:04]

Hi Lisa,

You make me HUNGRYYYYYYYY :)
Beautifull shot..
Excellent.

jp

hi lisa;
please stop posting pictures of food as i am ravenous.

i have burst my monitor as i stuck a fork into it trying to eat your delicious pic.

you can either pay for my new monitor or send me a food parcel.(food parcel preferred)
have a nice day.
regards

Brian

Hi Lisa..this is a nice composition..nice sharpness and details.

Roger

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  • puffy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2015 W: 136 N: 3063] (16565)
  • [2008-07-02 0:52]
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Hi Lisa,

Nice food you captured here, love your arrangment and presentation, it look very yummy... one thing I find it bother me (if you don't mind me) is the OE here, other then that everything is A-OK! :D Nice details, colours and contrast, very nice composition and pp work.

Have a nice day,

Cheers,
Sweety

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3342 W: 681 N: 1922] (16089)
  • [2008-07-02 3:11]

Excellent piece of work !

thanks,
v

Hey, Lisa -
This food is so beautifully presented. I loved the way you positioned the bowl on the dish. Great choice of black background. The light plays nicely over the food -- might be a tiny bit strong reflecting off the foil wrapping in the lower right, but its a very small issue. I'm ... so ... hungry ...

Lisa
hello from Poland
and really tasty dish
good photo and details
I want to prove and when home I ll do it
ciao
Lucio

Looks great Lisa.

If you have like on the lemon a bit of overexposure, you can use the clone stamp in PhotoFiltre set on opacity 10% to clone back in some texture.

TFS
Els

Hello Lisa!
Beautiful shot! Amazing sharpness!
TFS,
Flaminia

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  • Dingo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3254 W: 375 N: 2703] (11618)
  • [2008-07-05 14:17]
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I like the presentation with the square plates arranged like this, Lisa... very nice 'product' shots, light and all is ok.
One nit-pick: the cut-off fork does look very unnatural like this (way too short), so you should clone it out entirely or, even better, you should have removed it before shooting it.
Just my idea, of course.
TFS

Could I have some, plizzzz! :))) It looks delicious! Great job Lisa! Wonderful work!
Diana

I`m hungry now. Great shot of food :D Colors are greate and it`s look yummy :D Great job :D

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