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A Smile Says it All


A Smile Says it All
Photo Information
Copyright: Rick Ryan (NaperRick) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 22 W: 1 N: 11] (178)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-07-04
Categories: Daily Life, Artwork, Friends/Family, Portrait
Camera: Nikon D300 DSLR, Nikon 50mm/1,4 AFD
Exposure: f/2, 1/400 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-07-12 8:15
Viewed: 188
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Since the heavily processed version wasn't too well received I thought I better post the original.

You comments appreciated.

Rick
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To Kilted-Arab: Thanks RichardNaperRick 1 07-13 11:59
To lisapw1: Thanks LisaNaperRick 1 07-13 11:50
To boonie: Thanks Dan,NaperRick 1 07-13 11:46
To Rusty1: Thanks ShaunNaperRick 1 07-12 08:36
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  • Rusty1 (48)
  • [2008-07-12 8:25]
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Hi Rick,

This one definitely looks a lot better. The skin tones are more natural. Nice composition.

Shaun

:-)

yep, this one is a lot better, more natural tones and a less "other worldly" feel. The overall balance between the colours is realistic and we can concentrate more on the child and image rather than the pp work, if that makes sense. Far prefer this version :-)

Just a thought, but maybe the heavy pp work is more suited to landscapes or still lifes rather than people initially? Dunno why, just a feeling...

Hi Rick,

I much prefer this one to the other. I'd rather see the heavy post processing on photos of adults. Kids are just too darn cute to "mess with"!

that's just my opinion, Lisa

Hi Rick
Glad that most of the folks that critiqued the first one payed this one a visit. Much better, his eyes dominate the image.
Dan

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