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NaTuRaL FRaMiNG - LoNeLY DRiVe


NaTuRaL FRaMiNG - LoNeLY DRiVe
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Copyright: SaNi CaSTRo (y2kosan) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 198 W: 49 N: 295] (1642)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-08-13
Categories: Daily Life, Nature, Decisive Moment
Camera: Canon Rebel XT, Tamron 18-200mm XR di II Macro
Exposure: f/13.0, 1/500 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Friday Theme 2008/08/15 "Natural Framing" [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-08-14 2:44
Viewed: 323
Points: 30
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
here's my contribution for this week's theme...
NATURAL FRAMING

i didn't really know what to submit, had a few ideas but was always hitting a wall. finally my boss took me to lunch for my annual review and we ate at this restaurant by the beach and saw this place. fell in love and decided to go back there again. went around the park - saw a few trees i could use as my frames but was not satisfied with the outcome. and finally here it is. hoping i did justice to it.

PP Work:
adjust brightness/contrast
enhance colors and details.
no cropping & added borders.

thanks for passing by.
y2koSan

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  • Great 
  • pikas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 158 W: 9 N: 281] (1100)
  • [2008-08-14 3:00]

Hi Castro,

Great shot!!!

Sharp and fine details image.

Excellent composition and framework. Magnific colors!

Best Regards from Portugal,

Mário

hello Sani
how are you?
this is a nice shot for the theme
fine natural frame
it seems that your expouser has jupmed one point thats why we have lost some details here, the depth could have been more defined.

regards
Manuj Mehta

sani, excellent framing you have here...

SaNi Hi:
Wonderful natural framing. Looks like a beautiful place for lunch and relax.
Congratulations, very nicely done.
Larry
USA-tfs

Ayos ito Sani, talagang naka framed, kaso nagastusan ka pa ng gas, di bale ganda naman ng shot mo :-)sulit
Dennis

Hi Sani,

this is a beautiful image indeed but the pale sky makes the subjects within the frame look too bright.

TFS
Regards
Agoes

Hello Sani

A nice bright summery warm vuew here, nicely framed naturally with the tree and the grasses.Why did you add another white frame though?

TFS and for joining in the theme

Kind regards Helen

Hi Sani,
Beautiful landscape with a beautiful naturel framing, good colors and sharp picture, Excellent POV. and details,, very well done.
Michel

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  • Ramdan Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 701 W: 31 N: 1420] (5756)
  • [2008-08-14 21:49]

Hi SaNi,
The POV is beautiful. Sharpness and clarity are good as well. Should be more beautiful if the sky isn't too bright that some details had lost here, my friend. Anyway, a nice contribution to the theme.
Regards,
Ramdan.

hello Sani,

you should leave the natural frame just like that without the pp white frame :) its a lovely view but a bit bright.. anyway this is still lovely.. tfs..

regards, terry

Hi Sani
Lovely landscape with exclellnt framing.
Best wishes
Melany

I feel the light was against you Sani but the image is framed well by the trees and grass. Paler colours have produced some fine detail in the middle distance. Helen did say no PP frame though,
David

  • Great 
  • Dot Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1400 W: 31 N: 3045] (12330)
  • [2008-08-15 6:16]

HI Sani
A very good composition of framing with the trees.A shame that you got one of those skies that we get when shooting midday,if the shot is not recomposed, nevertheless good shot for the theme.
Dot

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  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1489 W: 123 N: 2164] (19817)
  • [2008-08-15 15:06]

Hello Sani, very good shot fot the theme, well composed and sharp image, thanks!

Mario

:-) tomorrow

  • Great 
  • eosnut Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 588 W: 164 N: 1399] (10095)
  • [2008-08-18 2:56]

Hi Sani,
Your frame works very well, it is a lovely scene.
Just a little over exposed, try setting your EV to minus 1 F stop.
Cheers,
Pete.

tama natural framing nga, may napansin lang ako pro napakaliit na bagay medyo tilted, at least masasabi mo na talagang tinitignan ko ang shot mo, hehe, tfs

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