<< Previous Next >>

aLoNG THe BaY. . .


aLoNG THe BaY. . .
Photo Information
Copyright: SaNi CaSTRo (y2kosan) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 198 W: 49 N: 295] (1642)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-08-13
Categories: Daily Life, Nature
Camera: Canon Rebel XT, Tamron 18-200mm XR di II Macro
Exposure: f/14.0, 1/400 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-08-19 2:52
Viewed: 299
Points: 18
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
another shot i took during my quest for the friday's theme last week, "natural framing".

this is by the san francisco bay. just fell in love with the clear water and the way the rocks were arranged.

pleas allow me to critique myself, i wish the sky was a little bluer to match the water. i am planning to invest on some filters, any suggestions? any help will be appreciated.

to all the passers by, thanks...
y2koSan
manujmehta, cunejo200, mvdisco, Hendrika has marked this note useful
Only registered TrekLens members may rate photo notes.
Add Critique [Critiquing Guidelines] 
Only registered TrekLens members may write critiques.
Discussions
None
You must be logged in to start a discussion.

Critiques [Translate]

hello Sani
how are you?
nice depth
good pov
nice defined curve
good expouser
nice details and sharpness
good low angle shot

regards
Manuj Mehta

SaNi Hi:
Beautiful bayscape - amazing POV, clarity and excellent dof. I like the colors you have captured within the rocks, as well.
Thanks for the note
Congratulations, very nicely done
Larry
USA-tfs

A beautiful composition SaNi. The diagonal is attractive, and the rocks on the f/g are sharp. Re: filters, you may want to get a polarizer first as this will help in making the sky bluer; a neutral density (ND) graduated filter may also help to bring down the brightness on the sky. (BTW, I buy my photo supplies online at B&H, a very reputable store.) Have a good day! Danilo

dto maayos na ang horizon, parang ang ganda din sa lugar na ito, tfs

Hi Sani,
Nice perpective and beautiful POINT of VIEW of this Bay, great focus for a sharpness picture,
Very well done. Excellent colors too.
Michel

  • Great 
  • jan515 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2498 W: 56 N: 3862] (17484)
  • [2008-08-19 8:40]

It is super. Beautifully visually, very well compound. Congratulations, very well!
well done.
Janusz

Hi Sani,

beautiful lead-in line with nice details on the rocks. a great shot, pal & well done!

TFS
Regards
Agoes

Hi Sani,

I love the colours in the boulders that frame the bay and there is colour in the sky, only not the deep blue you seem to have wanted.
I made you a WS for a quick fix to get a bit more colour in the sky.

TFS
Els

  • Great 
  • foozi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 595 W: 0 N: 957] (4608)
  • [2008-08-26 8:10]

Hello SaNi,
a great exploitation of the perspectives. The rocks and lining trees give a great impact to the shot. There is a sort of graphic design combination when the blue colur of the sea meet the bending lines of the seaside.
Well composed and you exploit the subject well.

Regards,
Foozi

Calibration Check
















0123456789ABCDEF