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Green Fruit


Green Fruit
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Copyright: Lisa Williams (lisapw1) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 791 W: 106 N: 1546] (8356)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-08-09
Categories: HPP [Heavily Post-Processed]
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/30 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Let's Eat! [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-08-20 3:24
Viewed: 325
Points: 26
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Another view of my apples and pears. I rarely use my flash any more as I only use the camera source and think it too harsh. But, I used the flash on this one. I changed the background, added contrast, reduced noise, gamma correct, frame, resize for upload.

Enjoy your day! Lisa
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Hello Lisa!
So lovely composition, green fruits and black background!
Nice idea and very well done!
Best regards!
Lili

very good pp nice arrangement good compo nice framing nice shot

cris(",)

Hi Lisa,
very good presentation, good colors, lighting and sharpness.
I desagree only the large title over the very good frame applied.
TFS
Raimundo

ah OK NOW is OK!!!
nOW Is a perfect Lisa work
well done
beautiful light and contrast
soft tones and sharpness
very nice
ciao
Lucio

Nice work on this Lisa, could be a teenie bit sharper. I like how this almost looks like a flower on the thumbnail!
B-)
linda

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3314 W: 789 N: 4432] (19950)
  • [2008-08-20 9:13]
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Hi Lisa,
Very beautiful presentation of your green apples and pears!
You created a good still life at the manner of "clair-obscur" (shades and light!
Excellent PP work. Just a little nit-pick, I think that the lettering is just a tad too big!
Very nicely done! My compliments!Annie

Hi Lisa,
Nice fruity shot, good colours and composition, I like the addition of the leaves, the focus does look a little soft though.
Regards Andy

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  • Silke Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2846 W: 263 N: 5948] (23590)
  • [2008-08-20 14:18]

HI Lissa
I must admit that I like this one better. Superb light, excellent composition, and perfect contrasting BG
TFs
silke

Bonjour Lisa,
Je n'ai qu'un mot à dire:
Bravo!!!!
Ton cliché est une superbe nature morte, les couleurs et la lumière qui vient dessus la rende superbe!!!
Amitiés
Odile

Hi Lisa..nice still life...great details and colors.

Roger

Hi Lisa,

Very nice still life! I like the composition, the sharpness and presentation. The use of flash is not necessarily bad, but you can either get a diffuser or hold a rice paper over the flash to get softer lighting. If you are using a flashgun you can also bounce from the ceiling or a white cardboard.
TFS,
Love and hugs your cousin,
Vassilis

nice work, good compo, nice frame/ matching.
TFS.

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  • tibig Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 657 W: 26 N: 681] (7565)
  • [2008-09-06 8:21]

Good still-life work.
TFS,
Tibi

Hello Lisa

WOW ! These green fruits are in perfect frame here.
Excellent blakc bg management.
Simple and elegant work Lisa.

Kind regards

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