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Logan Going Up


Logan Going Up
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Copyright: Zeb Carlson (zebulus) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 79 W: 22 N: 151] (679)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-09-05
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/3.5, 1/20 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-09-09 3:45
Viewed: 292
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
More portraiture work. I told logan I wanted to practice taking grad-style photos, and this was the result.

Not a whole lot fancy done here, shot in RAW, adjusted levels and added vignetting. Cloned out a sign on the wall and cloned out a dude at the top of the escalator.

Hope you like it, thanks for looking!

-zeb
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To rewshearer: my biggest failingzebulus 1 09-09 15:23
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hello Zeb,
interesting blue tones.
maybe you have that picture from another POV ?

Yep and I know exactly where this was taken too! What a NIGHTMARE traffic situation on Graduation Day! Shelby also graduated this year!....Really cool..you must have gotten there EARLY..because when we were there it was PACKED...BUTT TO BUTT!
Nice work on this Zeb, love the vignetting which places the focus on Logan!
B-)
Linda

Interesting work Zeb!

My first comment would be how well you've managed the light, here. Must be the vignetting but it is nicely done, Logan really stands out in the shot. Colours are crisp and clear.

A little spooky to see the guy at the top's reflection in the glass, but no guy!!

The negative here is the composition - his central placement in the frame really doesn't work in my opinion. Via crop or different timing, this was a terrific opportunity to use the rule of thirds and place him in a much stronger part of the shot.

Overall though, nice work.

Rew

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