Choo, choo, choo... 5 minutes from home

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• szekelykristof (12589)
• [2008-09-11 22:22]

Hi Joni,
Nicely captured classic rail vehicle in beautiful colour. The park must be nice, too. Simple subject, but creative realization of the theme. I like the simple, but thick frame around it. It makes your image more impressive. Good job, TFS.
Greetings,
Kristof

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• juyona (15445)
• [2008-09-11 23:09]

Hola Joni,
simpática escena,
color y compo,
buenos detalles de este tren clásico.
saludos Joni

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• peterhanington (417)
• [2008-09-12 0:11]
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Hi Joni...

Nice theme park image - speaks of fun.

I think the image suffers from fact that the composition appears to be tilted towards the viewer, and is off the level. I have done a WS that will give you an idea of how to correct the problem.

Peter

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• Royaldevon (16516)
• [2008-09-12 0:35]

Hello Joni,

I copied and pasted your interesting shot to see if I could correct the aspect. On returning, Peter has already done a w/s which corrects the problem perfectly.

I love the content; it reminds me of Thomas the Tank Engine stories. Lovely, classical framing.

Kind regards,
Bev :-)

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• boomcat (16869)
• [2008-09-12 0:51]

hello Joni,

choo choo train, yea? very nice you live not far from the park.. lovely shot of the subject.. nice one for the theme.. tfs..

regards, terry

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• burak28 (16284)
• [2008-09-12 1:04]

Hi Joni
What a wonderful capture
Excellent colors and clarity
Have a nice weekends
Burak

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• melanysherden (2636)
• [2008-09-12 1:29]

Hi Joni
Is it posibel that such a locomotive drive yet? I like it very much. Excellent picture with wonderful colours. Thanks for the story
Best wishes
Melany

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• lrw1966 (0)
• [2008-09-12 7:16]

Joni Hi:
Beautiful, wonderful theme contribution.
It has been really amazing to see where 5 minutes has taken people around the world. Your part of our world is really beautiful
Thanks for the note, as always
Congratulations, very nicely composed and presented, my friend
Larry
USA-tfs

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• subs (2080)
• [2008-09-12 7:41]

Hi Joni,
Lovely capture of this interesting subject. Interesting tilted angle. Works well.
Regards,
Subashini

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• shelbeesmom (48152)
• [2008-09-12 10:21]

I love this Joni! Albuquerque is the coolest place I loved my visit there, even skied just up the road in Taos! Love this, nice pp work and good clarity!
B-)
Linda

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• Helkoryo (22130)
• [2008-09-13 16:00]

Hello Joni

A lovely capture here nice balanced shot with good sharp detail taken at a good angle. I love the wide white frame here it suits this image very well


TFS and for joining in the theme

kind regards Helen

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• hay_kes (57080)
• [2008-09-13 16:02]

Hi Joni,
Very nice composition vith excellent for the theme.TFS.
Cheers,

hAyAti

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• Dot (12472)
• [2008-09-14 6:22]

HI Joni
I recnetly took photos of a similar train in New Brusnwick, they are quite appealing especially for photo taking.
A good sharp perspective on a really bright day.
Dot

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• norenastramus (23336)
• [2008-09-14 12:33]

Hi Joni,
Excellent composition post for the theme.
Excellent colors and details.
Have a nice weekend
greetings
H.Ayhan
:)

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• boonie (7679)
• [2008-09-16 19:23]

Hi Joni
Good additon to the Friday Theme. Colorful little "guy". I imagine the kids keep it bury on the week ends.
I too noticed the tilt and discovered it had been taken care of.

Dan

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• Hormon_Manyer (2127)
• [2008-09-24 14:37]

Hi Joni again,
It's always great to have ladies in the train club. :) You show us an old narrow gauge steam engine, a very photogenic one indeed. Yes, the image turns to right a bit, but by my opinion Peter's version is oversaturated. Your colors are better. Tfs.
Best wishes, László

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• maestramari (1642)
• [2008-11-08 9:37]

I like this Joni,
Good color and light.
WEll done
Mari