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Natalie 13


Natalie 13
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Copyright: David Terry (dwterry) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 56 W: 0 N: 204] (2453)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-02-07
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon EOS 5D Mark II, Canon 85mm F1.2L
Exposure: f/1.6, 1/100 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-03-08 13:00
Viewed: 298
Points: 0
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is inside a library. It's a rather amazing looking building (architecturally speaking). Here is a link to see the background from a different angle:

Salt Lake Library

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A nice pose but for me the focus on the face is far too soft and the look in the eyes is a little too "far away" - she's looking out of the frame but not really intent on anything and not really with that day-dreaming look either. I also have to say that the watermark through the picture is very distracting.
Thanks....Mark

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