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.....The Pitcher.....


.....The Pitcher.....
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Copyright: Tricia Treen (ttreen) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1407 W: 130 N: 3823] (15870)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-06-13
Categories: Friends/Family
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/500 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-08-17 16:35
Viewed: 132
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
After some time not posting on TL due to personal reasons I am BACK =)....

Ok here it is...
pp work I cropped to make it more ~long~ feel free to tell me if that was wrong

I also added a few adjustments not much


I'm really looking on ways to ~fix~ the shadows on her face... I think I got the horizon right (but please tell me if you see diff)

yeah I cut the guys foot off but imo he is not the main subject.. oh darn should I have cropped him out?
Well you tell me that OK ????
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hi treen, i see you active on forums, what a load of rubbish all the bickering that gos on eh? dont get me wrong i am not saying you bicker but man some people are stange, i keep my nose out of forums unless i can answer or ask a photography questions, all the other bs people have to much time on their hands!
ok anyways, i hope you are well, i have a tough time critiquing this kind of image because i never know when to stop cropping so i try and shoot it correct in camera , si like the colors and sharpness other than that the cropping i dont know seems ok to me!
thanks,
scott

Hi Tricia,
Good to see your back. An interesting picture in a special crop which works fine and I do understand you made this panoramic crop to include the ball as well, but......the man's leg is cut and that's a shame. Also a pity that the ball is disturbed by the bags in the background. I would have cloned the ball and brought it more closer to Sarah. Anyway still a fine sports impression and Sarah's trow is well captured.
Hans

N.B. How's Max doing? :-)

Tricia,

Nice effort and I like the panorama effect, but I do have some concerns. Ok, the guy's foot is missing, but what about his other LEG? Where is his leg? Is it the angle? I like the action shot of her pitching the ball. Not sure of the distance, but I would also like to see the girl at bat in lieu of the base coach. Again, panorama is a nice choice here... ;) LIsa

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