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Photo Information
Copyright: Lisa Teed (Lisaslucky13) (89)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-09-12
Categories: Nature
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/320 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-09-19 8:44
Viewed: 83
Points: 3
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Captured this little cutie storing up for the winter. It's little nest overlooks Indian Head Point on Black Lake.
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  • Great 
  • Jonela Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 377 W: 2 N: 378] (2767)
  • [2009-09-19 10:53]

Hi Lisa,

An excellent shot of this chipmunk with it's mouthful although it might have been better if this was a bigger file size, you are allowed 300Kb and 800 pixels. The pov is very good as is the narrow dof nice colours and textures as well tfs.

Regards
Jon

  • Good 
  • Roly Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 183 W: 4 N: 59] (553)
  • [2009-09-19 12:43]

This is a very cute subject, nicely emphasized by the use of a shallow depth of field. It would be great to have a less central composition and especially to have the entire tail in the frame. The contrast, color saturation and sharpness could use some improvement.

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