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| Photo Information |
Copyright: Michel Lamy (Frenchy)
![Gold Star Critiquer [C: 114 W: 4 N: 8]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-n-n.gif) (1272) |
| Genre: Places |
| Medium: Color |
| Date Taken: 2009-10-18 |
| Categories: Nature |
| Camera: Nikon D300s |
| Exposure: f/5.6, 1/500 seconds |
| More Photo Info: [view] |
| Photo Version: Original Version |
| Date Submitted: 2009-10-18 16:08 |
| Viewed: 83 |
| Points: 0 |
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Hi Michel
Sharpness here is good but I think this shot loses a lot in its composition.
The centre of attention here is in the centre of the photo - and that is usually not the best place for it!
Additionally, with the duck's body on a diagonal up towards the top right of the frame, about 80% of the shot is empty and doesn't contribute to the shot.
A tighter crop might be the way to fix both issues, here?
Rew
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4893 W: 342 N: 3588]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-g-g.gif)
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