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Copyright: Daniel Krieger (smoothdude) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 286 W: 3 N: 101] (1330)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-07
Categories: Daily Life, Architecture
Camera: Nikon D-70
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-07-29 20:22
Viewed: 433
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Slightly cropped from original but other than that not much PP done here. I have been shooting a lot of shadows and walls lately. Also graffitti has been of interest, although here there is no real artistic value on what we see scribbled on this door.

I hope to visit some places in New Jersey I heard have some amazing graffitti soon and will post those pics.

Any comments on this? I haven't made my mind up if I like this or not. Is there any artistic value to this shot?

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Hi Daniel,
Hey! I recognize that piece of wall. More specifically, the lower right side! Good to see the truck was able to deliver its load. ;P
It's a decent shot. Good composition. This aged building has a lot of interesting characters; bricks, stains, door, graffitti and wires. Only thing I could suggest is if you might play with more contrast as this seems to be a little flat. I'm guessing it was taken on a cloudy day or alley? Anyhow, everything looks good.
Well done.
Richard

You must have some good feelings to this picture to upload it. Modesty?
The wall with door has a history, that's obvious. Those speakerwires are also interesting. Your composition is good, I would have more zoomed in.
I look forward to your graffity-work.
Huub

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  • NINIX Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 297 W: 128 N: 510] (6612)
  • [2005-07-31 5:30]

Hi Daniel,

I had qa quick look at your work too. This one I like very much. Just the structure of the stone and the old door. Very good.
Maybe you should not "improve" the colours to much.


Thanks,

Hendrik

I like this. Yes, it has artistic value, in my opinion. It's a simple, clean composition, and is very reminiscent of New York.

Hey Daniel,
I like this shot. I switched from the truck to the wall multiple times and I still can't say if the truck is carrying this wall or not... Oh well...
I really like the contrast of color between the door and the wall, I like that it's not centered, I like that you did not crop and remove the piece of concrete on the right top that makes a frame with the concrete on the bottom.
All in all you can't say there is no artistic value to this shot. But you know that there is, if not you would not have posted it ;)
Good job!
I am waiting also for you graffiti part and I am posting one right now.
See you later Daniel.
-Remi

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  • harpya Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5739 W: 198 N: 2519] (9917)
  • [2005-08-04 13:12]

Hello Daniel,
I like his work, in the center
of my city, me still encounter
excellent places for pictures, in this
same style that yours, and I find
this wonderful. His picture is perfect
I like, I like colors in the wall.
Congratulations for the picture

Sérgio

clean simple composition
demonstrating urban decay
nice graffiti shot
TFS
Dave R

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