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broken light
Photo Information
Copyright: Daniel Krieger (smoothdude) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 286 W: 3 N: 101] (1330)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-08
Categories: Daily Life, Architecture, HPP [Heavily Post-Processed]
Camera: Nikon D-70
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-09-02 10:14
Viewed: 339
Points: 9
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Just an experiment in photoshop I tried here.

Adjusting curves, resizing the photo and dropping it in several times. Lots of stuff actually.

This is a streetlight on Clinton Street in my Brooklyn hood.

Wow this note sucks

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To mwebr: hasmoothdude 2 09-21 11:46
To davido: thankssmoothdude 1 09-02 15:12
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wow. I wasn't expecting this one but it is pretty damn cool! I love the angle and lighting. Very interesting and creative post processing. Nice experiment! JP

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  • kateb Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 514 W: 153 N: 338] (2991)
  • [2005-09-02 12:07]
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Interesting and effective product. I like the one way sign and daylit tree included on the side, and the repeated black frames, then the contrast of the orange light with the blue/black. Nice product!

Bonjour Daniel,
I find the original shot tilted very interesting. The dramatic bllue sky and the nice orange light matches together... Good timing :o)
I also like the One Way road sign.
However I am more scpetical on the frame you've used. And I am surprised by the contrast between the white sky and the blue one. I know it was the purpose of the shot but I don't find the idea very relevant... (this is just a personal opinion btw)
Regards, David

Hi Daniel,
Nice experiment. I like the repetition of the frame work. And, I also like how the frame work is off centered, it also reminds me a little of the frame you get from Polaroid prints. I'm not too sure about that section in the upper right corner, I think it detracts from the image and doesn't quite match the rest of it, in my opinion. Still, it's fun to play and always good for the imagination. And, btw, the composition of the main image...with the extreme angle...dynamic and cool.
Take care.
Richard

Interesting experiment. I think I like this photo mostly for colors and frame chain (if you can call them that). Good job!
Skye

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  • mwebr Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 450 W: 141 N: 666] (3402)
  • [2005-09-21 11:02]
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Hey Daniel,
I like this experiment! I like the corner just being so different and drawing attention. Cool offset framing and the sky color is sweet with contrast! I like the lines..yep! Everything is groovy except for that sucky note...what's up with that..hehe :O)
Keep experimenting with the unusualness!

michael

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