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The scene at 6PM


The scene at 6PM
Photo Information
Copyright: Daniel Krieger (smoothdude) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 286 W: 3 N: 101] (1330)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-09
Categories: Daily Life, Transportation
Camera: Nikon D-70
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-09-22 10:45
Viewed: 430
Points: 18
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
A quiet scene in the subway on my way home. Some people read, some sleep, and some mutter to themselves (those are the crazy ones)

Some adjusting in curves and sharpened a bit.

I was very happy with the outcome and composition of this photograph.

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I like the angle you used in this shot. Nice lighting too. I am so glad you were able to get this shot in w/o at least one person looking right at the camera. This way, it gives a voyeuristic feel to it. I like the little hints of color you have throughout the photo from the clothing of the passengers. Thanks you so much for sharing!!

Hi Daniel,
Very cool shot! Another one off the hip? I do like the tilted composition. It makes it that more....."anxious." Also like how that one guy is either coming up (or letting go of) for the bar. Normally, I'd say something about guys getting cut off from the edges, but, since you have that other guy on the left also cut off, it balances the scene, in my opinion. However, there's a still a blur after you sharpened, so maybe you want to do it again. Other than that, it all looks good. Nice exposure, like the shadows on this one. Good work!
Richard

Hi Daniel, cool shot ! I've always been shy to take pictures on the subway. It feels like you shot this one from inside your coat.

Love it.

Marleen

Very nice daily life picture,No make over no editing,very nice..very well composed..
as far as your note concern I am not agree with you on "....and some mutter to themselves (those are the crazy ones)
......."
No they are not crazy(thats what i think)You even dont know what they are talking and what they are thinking to their selves...you know i was reading few days back that those people are intelligent enough and they can very much creative too!! what do you think.. No one in this world is useless.. if you take it in this way that People you captured on are usefull for you because they are model of your picture and without them you cant get good picture???
anyway,, nice picture..
Love
Mugush

I rode subway trains in Singapore, the cleanest, fastest of high tech there. Signs are everywhre telling people how to act, to be polite.

Every day new chances to make good pictures; great done; good to have this depth; the man left makes the picture very crowded and that is good; AND he was your shield for this snapshot
Thanks Daniel.
Huub

Hi Daniel,
It looks like I find another guy with an interest in subway.Good one, I like it.

I like this unaware moment. The angle you chose and the general composition work well. I like the movement of the hand in frame too.
paul

hehe...the subway. what train is it?

nice angle, great colors. Love it :)) TFS

  • Great 
  • Quos Silver Star Critiquer [C: 31 W: 0 N: 4] (183)
  • [2005-12-23 21:04]

I like that shit...nice composition...really great idea... greetings for new yorker....
Cheers

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