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emily
Photo Information
Copyright: Daniel Krieger (smoothdude) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 286 W: 3 N: 101] (1330)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-10
Categories: Daily Life, Transportation, Portrait
Camera: Nikon D-70
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-11-21 10:22
Viewed: 443
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Taken on Halloween in a Brooklyn subway station, this is my friend from work Emily.

I took several shots allowing the shutter (although I forget now what actual setting was) to be slow enough to make the train blur as it came into the station. I just told her to try to stay still and I think we managed to capture a good shot together.
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Humm humm, I’m worried Daniel : I don’t know if I can give you any points when I have not watched JCandeli’s boxer, uploaded before your pic… lol
Well your shot is not too bad with this DOF, I like Emily in front of this train in movement, but I’m not convinced with your centring : IMO she’s too centered on the pic.
Have a nice day ;o)
Martine

i like this type of subway photo daniel :)
good depth and movement

Hi Daniel,
I like the blurred background giving impression of a train passing behind ...
Your model has a nice expression but in my opinion, she is too centered in the composition and there is a too important dark part behind her and part of her seems to disappear in this dark part as she is dressed in dark also ...
Sylvie

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  • pompey Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 406 W: 156 N: 601] (8415)
  • [2005-11-21 17:11]

Good shot Daniel, good movement in the background, nice sharp foreground and good note too.
Thanks for sharing.
Michael.

Nice job. I think I commented on this on Flickr. (Am I allowed to mention them here??)

Believe it or not, I don't have any suggestions for this one. The lighting, exposure, sharpness and DOF are all where I think they should be. Nice one. JP

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