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Photo Information
Copyright: Hugh Siegel (bombilla) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 308 W: 85 N: 147] (1950)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-03-09
Categories: Daily Life, Friends/Family, Nocturnal, Portrait
Camera: Nikon D50, Nikkor 18-55mm AF-S DX f3.5-5.6, Nikon L1A
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-03-21 12:22
Viewed: 534
Points: 18
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
"And it was cold and it rained so I felt like an actor
And I thought of Ma and I wanted to get back there
Your face, your race, the way that you talk
I kiss you, you're beautiful, I want you to walk."
-David Bowie

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nice and good portait/ urban shot
i really like the light and composition
tfs
Marco

  • Great 
  • Alba Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 537 W: 0 N: 206] (2760)
  • [2007-03-21 12:38]

Hi Hugh,
Nice portrait of T. in the steam, nice colours and expression, well done!
Mary

  • Great 
  • erdna Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 629 W: 68 N: 746] (5421)
  • [2007-03-21 13:42]

A very well done street shot! The composition is well balanced and the subject woman is very well emphasized.

Thank you for your comments on my photo,"A Photo Shoot". I agree with you. I should have cropped it some more on the right hand side.

I also added as a supplement a WORKSHOP PHOTO. I wish I could have stayed around longer but I was with other people.

Andre'

Five Years, the opening track of Rise and Fall of Ziggy Stardust and the Spiders from Mars. I've sung that song at the top of my lungs a few times!
Nice work on the composition and lighting, a well chosen point of view, particularly with the unusual angles of lampposts and passer-by.
Creative work, well executed.
Rew

Nice to see T after a while. Great shot. I like the angles.

hi Hugh,

Very special mood here, great work with the flash on T. and the smoke, this makes it a bit scaring ... could be a scene from a movie.
greetings, inn

j'aime bien ta position je veux dire le profil avec un legere sourire et un regard dur c beau


irmani

Impressive capture, Hugh !
I like your model but I am much attracted by what happens in the background, a sort of end of the world ...
She seems to be fascinated by something, someone. I am not a fan of the flash but I imagine the conditions of light were not ideal, I like your tilt too.
Sylvie

Excellent compo, warm colors and foggy atmosphere. Nice girl and the city.

TFS,

Andreea

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