summer in the city

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• jcandeli (3985)
• [2005-05-11 7:01]
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Hey Nino! Sorry I have not commented in a while. I am trying to take a break for a little while although I do check this site ofter. I really like this one. It is funny and interesting to look at. The composition is good too. I was going to suggest trying to crop it so that all you could see was this guy in the fountain (just to see what it would look like. Not saying that it would be better or worse) but I really like the guy with the guitar in the photo two. I like photos that have more then one subject in them. A primary subject and a secondary subject. This one has both.
Nice job. JP

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• Shutter2Think (0)
• [2005-05-11 12:57]

Hi Nino,
Nice shot. Very good capture of a summertime scene.
I saw the workshop. I think it can go either way. This way, we have a more sense of place, as I can see it is at a park during an event...the other way...some kid in the middle of a fountain. So, it depends really on what kind of pov you want to portray. Good job.
Take care!
Richard

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• mspixalot (492)
• [2005-06-10 19:39]

hot time, summer in the city, back o' my neck gettin' dirty and gritty as I recall, Eric Burdon & The Animals; maybe this should go in that "song title" theme here on TL. Anyway, nice and evocative shot -- the song immediately began running through my brain. thanks for posting it regards, ck