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Pasta
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Copyright: Lisa Williams (lisapw1) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 756 W: 97 N: 1198] (5961)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-08-31
Categories: Food
Exposure: f/3.2, 1/8 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-09-03 13:58
Viewed: 204
Points: 7
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I really like fresh summer vegetables. I make a pasta dish with uncooked tomatoes, green onions, peppers, olives, and fresh herbs. I usually put some nice, strong, Italian cheese on top. Delicious!

I added contrast, gamma, slight satuation to brighten up the tomatoes, frame and text.
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Looking yummy,..:), mouth watering, keep on.
TFS.

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  • Leica Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 40 W: 25 N: 9] (868)
  • [2008-09-03 16:07]

Hi Lisa.

That sounds delicious but you need a sharp and focused image to reflect this mouth watering recipes.

Bonjour Lisa,
Ta cuisine doit être excellent, rien que la photo à 10h30 du matin, me donne faim!!!
Excellente composition très colorée et apparemment très succulente!
Amitiés
Odile

A nice balance of detail and contrast. Excellent photo!
Best wishes,
Achim

Hi Lisa
Love the freshness coming out of this lovely, colourful photo, nice idea, well done.
Vicky
p.s. Try to add fetta cheese (Greek goat cheese) in your salad...trust me, I'm a salad freak!

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  • Dingo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2879 W: 368 N: 2718] (11723)
  • [2008-09-09 11:31]

Mmm... Lisa, I wonder, did you upload this to test the tl community?
I very rarely use the sad smiley, but this picture deserves none else.
I see unsharpness all over, both under- and overexposure, light reflections all around, and a very busy compo. My eyes don't find a single point to focus on, to rest upon. Even the text appears to be blurry...
I'm sure the pasta salad was tasty and I can imagine enjoying it... but I'm sorry, in the picture I can't find anything appealing...
Which is, of course, nothing more than my honest yet very personal opinion. Sorry.
Frank

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