<< Previous Next >>

More from the studio


More from the studio
Photo Information
Copyright: Cordelia Gee (chocolate29) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 388 W: 35 N: 610] (2697)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-09-08
Categories: Artwork, Experimental
Camera: Panasonic Lumix DMC-FZ30, Leica DC Vario-Elmarit 1:28-3.7/7.4-88.8
Details: Tripod: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-09-16 6:41
Viewed: 797
Points: 56
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is another shot from the studio lighting course I am taking. One thing I am learning in this course for sure is how much I DON'T know...

The grey BG results from grey boards being held on both sides of the glasses in order to change the light.

I find my previous shot more beautiful than this one. Unfortunately though, the glasses in that image have fingerprints all over, which are especially visible at the top and which I had been unable to see on the old screen I am working with. So this image is cropped considerably. I also cloned out some fingerprints remaining on the glass with the blue water. I hope you like it like this...? Your opinion is always welcome.

PP: Cropped, cloned out fingerprints, framed and resized

F-stop 3.6
Exposure 1/10
ISO 200

Thank you for visiting and have a good week!

wenqing, Travelcam, Refugee, docdexter, Urfaust, Silke, OeilMagique, moli, spacebar has marked this note useful
Only registered TrekLens members may rate photo notes.
Add Critique [Critiquing Guidelines] 
Only registered TrekLens members may write critiques.
Discussions
ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To OeilMagique: Merci mille fois, Paulchocolate29 1 12-26 20:26
To Peralta: Thank you, Esperancachocolate29 1 10-04 05:37
To Silke: Thank you, Silke!chocolate29 1 09-27 20:34
To jentt: Merci beaucoup, Antoinechocolate29 1 09-27 19:50
To edal: Thank you, Antonchocolate29 1 09-23 05:31
To Alfonso: Thank you, ALiaksandrchocolate29 1 09-23 05:28
To docdexter: Thank you, Nielchocolate29 1 09-23 05:26
To r021251: Merci beaucoup, Réalchocolate29 1 09-18 05:19
To wishnugaruda: Thank you, Sabinechocolate29 1 09-16 16:31
To TasmaniaC: Thank you, Alaettinchocolate29 1 09-16 15:44
You must be logged in to start a discussion.

Critiques [Translate]

Hi Cordelia,
I like this composition . Great light and colors . You managed the light very well in your studio and the result is pleasant to see . You did a good choice of colors .
Daniel

Graphic colours,excellent frame and amazing picture, well done cordelia.

good use of colors in this composition cordelia :)
excellent layout and presentation

koh

  • Great 
  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3312 W: 788 N: 4424] (19910)
  • [2007-09-16 9:49]

Hi Cordelia,
I like much the visual impact of your tight crop! Excellent light and play of colors. Very pleasant image! Bravo! Annie

  • Great 
  • veve (34)
  • [2007-09-16 10:04]

Hi Cordelia,
Very nice experiment!
Great colors and light management!
I like it!
Best regards,
Veronica

very tasty colours! Regards Iza

Hi Cordilia,
wonderful and abstract work again, I like it so much. I also did a little abstractness today - I love to see and show unusual shot - and this is one! Thanks and greetings
Sabine - wishnugaruda

Beautiful colours and shapes - great use of the light to capture this.
Thanks for sharing
Mark

Cordelia, nice tight cropping and vivid colours work very well here.. I'm not sure if it was the glass' texture that left some spotting on first two look a bit distracting, it may have been easier to remove them on your original shot before resizing.. your course seems to produce some nice artwork too ;) good luck.

aK

very bright and colorfull! I like it!
Thanks. LuDivine

Stunning array of colours Cordelia. Very creative, I like how you've allowed and captured the light through the glasses. Great concept, great capture, great TL posting! Well done!

Martyn

  • Great 
  • lavan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 695 W: 2 N: 126] (3446)
  • [2007-09-17 2:59]

Good colors with well managed exposure with sharpness...

Que c'est joli ce jeu de couleur splendide, belle précision d'image .. bravo.. réal.

hola Cordelia

I love this kind of pictures plenty of colours and shapes they are really very atractive

regards

jjo

Only 4 glasses containing different colours Cordelia to produce many other colours. Good tight crop, nice colour and good focus on the leading glass. TFS,
David

Many thanks for your comment on ‘Willow in Fog’

Pryvitanne Cordelia!
Beautiful!Colourful!I like it! ALL made well!;)
ALiaksandr

Hi there!
I usually don't like studio-type set up shots, but this one is great!
The colours are amazing, your composition is brilliant and the details are super-sharp. The play between the colours is fantastic.
Well done!

  • Great 
  • edal Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 599 W: 71 N: 645] (4306)
  • [2007-09-18 14:07]
  • [+]

Hi Cordelia!
This is also fascinating. The tighter crop gives another peculiarity to the composition - hardly explainable but influential.

Will you be generous enough to share with us the recipe of the liquids?

Greetings from the other side of the Earth!
Anton

  • Great 
  • jentt Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 198 W: 71 N: 419] (3693)
  • [2007-09-19 0:22]
  • [+]

Bonjour Cordelia
Je trouve les jeux de couleurs ainsi que les reflets tout a fait étonnant. C'est une excellente idée, parfaitement bien réalisée et donnant un résultat très graphique et très agréable a regarder. Bravo.
Amicalement
Antoine

  • Great 
  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3272 W: 267 N: 7752] (33054)
  • [2007-09-24 3:24]

Wow! Excellent work here Cordelia. I love the different colours and how they change. Well done
Janice

  • Great 
  • limba3 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1082 W: 436 N: 421] (13328)
  • [2007-09-24 5:36]

Hi
nice shot! Compo magnific, what a creative work!
Anna

ok cordelia... i rethink about my precedent judgement.. ;)
this is the best of 3...
i like so much the pov.. and the play of colours.. forms and light.. great shot!!!
ciao Marco

  •      
  • Silke Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2847 W: 263 N: 5947] (23588)
  • [2007-09-24 15:48]
  • [+]

I am glad to see you back again, Cordelia
This is a lovely posting! Great colours, super details.
Glass is so hard to work with!
TFS
silke

Hi Cordelia, wow, this is very nice and I like the close-up on the glasses and the colours.
This and the previous one are my favourite of the 3.
Very well done! Take care, Yan :)

Ps: many thx for your great comment on "Joffre Lakes, Upper Lake of the 3 Lakes" :) I am very pleased that you like it!

  • Great 
  • Dawn Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1134 W: 100 N: 3363] (17532)
  • [2007-09-28 3:00]

Hello Cordelia, I have noticed these glass photos of yours a few times now.. and didnt have time to stop... they are very eyecatching and colourful..I do like your composition.

Cheers dawn.

Hi Cordelia,
I love the combination of curves, colours, textures, shades - it's fantastic!
Thanks for sharing,
Esperança

J'aime bien les gens qui essaye différentes chose en photo. Beaucoup de personne ne se rendent pas compte du travail, du temps et de l'effort qu'il faut parfois mettre pour réaliser des images intéressantes, créatives et esthétique. Je n'ai jamais suivis de cours, mais je croîs que c'est très bon, je le ferrai peut-être dans l'avenir. Parfois je vois une image dans la tête d'un objet ou d'une scène quelconque et j'essaye de reproduire cette image en photo, je peux y passer des heures, parfois seulement quelques minutes ou secondes et parfois ne pas a y arriver...
J'ai déjà essayé des portraits de coupes à vin avec des résultats pour le moins décevant. Ici ta présentation est for jolie encore un fois, le jeu de lumière est fascinant. Bon assez parler.

Paul

hi Cordelia.. a very good compo! The colours are stunning.. Brava!

  • Great 
  • moli Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1423 W: 275 N: 1982] (12186)
  • [2008-02-13 22:11]

Hello Cordelia.
Very interesting presentation. Good idea.
Looks very effective.
My compliments.
janek Kloss

Hello Cordelia!
I just visited your gallery and I dont'know if you are better in people reporting or in still life! :-)
This one is astonishing, in my opinion, because it shows, in the same time, the different way in capturing light by different colors, and the natural merging of the glass set.
TFS
Ciao, Antonella

Calibration Check
















0123456789ABCDEF