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Serenity


Serenity
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Copyright: christine fendley (chrisfendley) (264)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-01-10
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/3.3, 1/800 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-04-23 5:33
Viewed: 217
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Taken on the south coast of Sydney. I haven't changed anything in this snap, just pressed the button, but am open to ideas.
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Hi Christine,
a good capture of this scenery. The play of light and shadow on the lake and in the clouds is very interesting.
I think your decision for a grey / silver frame was a good one. But on the right hand side and at the bottom, especially at the bottom right corner, I do not like the framing that much. I think it is a bit distracting, just like the copyright sign. All these things lead the eyes away from the overall good composition.
Maybe you can choose a different frame to present the image and get rid off the copyright sign? Just a suggestion, please don't get me wrong.
Thanks for sharing this image.
Kindest regards, Britta

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  • Mitch Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 80 W: 1 N: 161] (733)
  • [2009-04-23 7:12]

How bizzare, you've named a shot Serenity, just like i did a few weeks ago.

Yeah, very nice shot, very nice subject matter and dare i say, very nice title!

I agree with Britta on the bottom right frame decor.
You have captured such a beautiful shot, you don't need anything to take the eye away from the picture.
As soon as i opened the image to view it, the first thing i looked at before the photo was the artwork in the frame design.

A beautiful capture though Christine, that needs no enhancing with software design.

well done,

Martin

Quite a romantic shot. The reflections in the water are great. The frame is a matter of taste.
Regards
John

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  • Adri Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 532 W: 23 N: 1859] (11296)
  • [2009-04-23 11:24]

Hi Christine,
A lovely picture!
Beautiful tones and light.
Great reflections and silhouets.

TFS and greetings from Netherlands,
Adri

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