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Portrait of Anna


Portrait of Anna
Photo Information
Copyright: David Lazar (dvlazar) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 52 W: 0 N: 72] (539)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-11
Categories: Portrait
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-11-14 15:35
Viewed: 384
Points: 22
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
A portrait of Anna - using 2 softbox lights set on constant lighting.
This was taken as a headshot, and I asked her to turn to the side and lean in on the table, which seems to give a more engaging and intimate look than sitting upright and front on.
Some have said she looks like a particular famous actress in this shot!

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Nice portrait David, good skin tones and detail.

Regards Mark :)

One hot chic with nice clear tech!

hi David!!

very beautiful girl!!
she is similar to Natalie Imbruglia...is she native Australian?
i dont know which actress could she resamble..
well done portrait..
TFS
Kiss

Ania

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  • Roly Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 183 W: 4 N: 59] (553)
  • [2008-11-14 16:12]
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Very nice portrait, even if not quite as original as some of your other contributions. Otherwise, there is not much to criticize here, the model is good looking and the photography is well executed. I found that precise focusing with wide aperture is very challenging, especially hand held. It would be great if you would post the EXIF data. Yes, there is some noticeable similarity with Angelina Jolie.

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  • dareco Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1717 W: 16 N: 840] (15143)
  • [2008-11-14 16:41]

At first glance I thought it was Angelina Jolie, she's very similar and very beautiful! Once again it's very nice to see your portrait work, and this is great. I like the colors and skin tone. TFS

V ery beautiful. Loots a bit like Angelina Jolie :-) Great eyes, nice exposure! Very big aperture as the focus is on the right eye and hair on her right. Did you shoot at F2 or F2.8 ? 5.6 and you would have probably catch both eyes in perfect focus. But this shot is really great! Wow nice job! Her lips makes me want to touch them :-) Very nice picture!

Hello David,

Excellent portrait of this beautiful and young model.
Colors, lighting, contrast and sharpnesse are great!
I did a WS and hope you don't mind!
Best regards,
Sergio

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  • jackal Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 303 W: 3 N: 216] (2883)
  • [2008-11-16 12:05]

Stunning portrait David,
Anna has beautiful eyes and perfectly formed lips, you have done a great job in capturing her beauty
well done
Jack

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  • willie Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 209 W: 8 N: 306] (3101)
  • [2008-11-16 13:50]

hi david,

Looks like you are surrounded by beautiful women. Another nice portrait. Good light and a nice comp.

regards, willie

Hi David,
I thought this portrait is borderline a "beauty shot".
Lighting and exposure are pretty good.
A few flaws make-up wise, make some blemish appear on the forehead, which in a close-up bother me a little. I did a workshop to correct this.
Good pose, the model looks very attractive.
Nice lips...))).
I'm not to keen on the choice of background, just personnel taste.
Overall, nice shot. Hope to see more from you.

HI David...you have a nice sense of style with your portraits...nice tones and details...great pose from a beautiful woman.

Roger

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