Australian Actress 2

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• Roly (553)
• [2008-12-04 21:17]

Do you want to test the impact the model has on the evaluation of your images? Well, I'm sure it has a considerable impact. It's a good and simple picture owing good part of its appeal to the good looking model. I have to say, I liked your previous shot with the same model better, found it a bit nicer composed and Robyn's pose was more appealing. Is it possible that the white balance in the two images is different? The previous image seemed to have better skin tones, somewhat colder. All this doesn't change the fact that this is a great image, even if it appears less professional by comparison with the other shot. Great eye contact, very catchy, and good light.

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• KBE (2707)
• [2008-12-04 21:47]

Hello David
What a beautiful model, what a lovely smile... brillient tones.
I just feel that if u've tried to bring her head (hair) full in fram and may be from lower side u'd have removed left arm which is appearing in very low portion, may have added in beauty :)

TFS
Cheers
JZM

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• ScottHale (136)
• [2008-12-05 2:11]

David,
Great use of lighting here. Nice pose, great eye contact and catch-light.
Even with the semi tight framing you have given us, you missed the top of her head, you still nailed this photo. Of course her beauty probably makes me overlook some flaws which may not seem fair but so what! :)
Well done! Man, the smile is very......mesmerizing!
Scott

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• rminkow (15239)
• [2008-12-05 7:05]
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Hi David..beautiful shot of this pretty lady...the light and tones are perfect...I think I would have cropped it tighter to focus more one her great face..but this is nice work.

I did a workshop to show a different crop and angle.


Roger

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• dareco (15143)
• [2008-12-05 16:26]

Another very beautiful portrait of this lady. A lovely expression, and excellent eye contact. TFS