Road to nowhere

Critiques [Translate]

•  
• pumpkinman (605)
• [2009-05-03 19:54]
• [+]

Hi Charlene,
This isn't really a very good photo, sorry I'm being so blunt. The horizon is tilted, you can see reflections on the window and it isn't very well composed. I love the blue of the sky though.
Regards,
Phil

•  
• rewshearer (20595)
• [2009-05-07 16:31]

Hi Charlene

You have a good camera capable of delivering great shots, I think it can do better than this.

When you're stuck inside a bus it can be very hard to get good shots through the window. Try shooting directly out, rather than at an angle, and press the lens to the glass so you avoid getting reflections of the people inside the bus!!

Also don't be afraid of cropping your photo to remove elements that don't add to the view or composition. (The road and the bus' shadow at the bottom of the frame can be cut out - which will bring the horizon lower in the shot and improve your composition!)

A Photographer's Note will help, too. ;)

Rew