<< Previous Next >>

misty my cat


misty my cat
Photo Information
Copyright: ricki St (ricki) (64)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-10-05
Categories: Pets
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/60 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-10-04 16:59
Viewed: 144
Points: 2
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
this is my cat misty she like to lay around and look at me
Add Critique [Critiquing Guidelines] 
Only registered TrekLens members may write critiques.
Discussions
ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To andateaffan: catricki 2 10-05 16:58
To walk33a: my catricki 1 10-04 22:26
You must be logged in to start a discussion.

Critiques [Translate]

Hi Ricki!

I'm glad to see that you're still clicking away. This is a very sharp photo of a very pretty cat.

I've been working with discovering my own look, especially putting my twist on the framing. Take a look at my site to see what I've been working on.

Thanks,
Dennis

Hi Ricki

Sorry I have to be honest - this isn't a good shot.

The overall composition is all right, with the cat's face off-centre in the frame, but your shutter speed of 1/60s has meant that there was some camera shake; it's a little blurred.

Also, you've managed to clip all of its paws from the frame - really they should all be included in shot.

Finally - your signature/email at the bottom of the frame, to me is quite distracting; if it's really essential to include, perhaps put it on the left so it's not competing with your subject?

Keep shooting!
Rew

http://www.treklens.com/themes.php?thid=4974

check out this link for catsnaps and see how yours and the ones in the theme differ

ciao Ricki
perchè hai tagliato le gambe al povero gatto?
poverino
era meglio lasciarlo intero oppure stringere l'inquadratura sull faccia
bel gatto però
guarda che il Kilted ti aiuta molto
ascoltalo e farai tanta strada

Calibration Check
















0123456789ABCDEF