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The 9:29 to Bendigo


The 9:29 to Bendigo
Photo Information
Copyright: Peter Collins (spike1) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 507 W: 0 N: 464] (4321)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-12-05
Categories: Transportation
Camera: Canon EOS 20D, 17-40mm/f4L
Exposure: f/5.0, 2 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): evvka's favorite from TL#1 [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2005-12-10 7:32
Viewed: 704
Points: 38
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Just passing through, the train had no time to stop today.


PP:levels, saturation and contrast adjust, frame
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Do you sit here all night?
Another wonderful creation from an everyday (every night?) situation. Highly commended.
White frame?

Hello Peter,
Some great play of light and colours here! Great capture of the moment, post processing enhancing the creation... Very well done!
Regards,
Pablo -

Beautiful picture, Peter. I really like the colours and the sense of mouvement in this picture as well as the format you have selected. Nicely composed with the train crossing light on the right and the train coming from the left. Well done!

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4243 W: 414 N: 6720] (42311)
  • [2005-12-10 8:47]

Hi Peter

I like the electric colors & panoramic format. The motion blur adds dynamism. Well done!

Beautiful capture, yet again, Peter! The coloured layers on top of the white line are superb. Great composition, good use of the wide format. Congratulations!

The colours are stunning, quite abstract, yet still recognizable, thanx, M(*_*)

Wioo Hoo!
Wonderful composition. I love it. Your headlights on the side of the train, made this impressivce results.
Framning just right too!
Congratulations !
Robert

noce shot. I like the amazing colors. Really beautiful

another great one. This is like a beautiful painting. LOVE the lighting and colors. JP

Great shot Peter. Fascinating effect you have created here. TFS
David

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  • linus Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1477 W: 10 N: 738] (10767)
  • [2005-12-10 17:54]

Nice one Peter,
I like your semi-abstract images. Good work.
Sunil

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  • nova Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2735 W: 263 N: 864] (8653)
  • [2005-12-10 21:49]

Great series,Peter! This one is a bit abstract but I love its designs with the horizontal lines! Beautiful colors! Well done! Michel

The train give an effect very impressive. I like the light on that view! Mouvement transporm totally the train in nice strype on the sky!

And I am thinking, "How long did you wait for this one?" or "Was it one of those lucky arrivals?" I really do like it. I like your cropping. It adds speed. I wonder where the blue is coming from. I like the way the cross-beams cut the blue. What were the people inside seeing? Mmmm. Is Bendigo to the right or left? I wonder! I love it Peter.
Cheers Barry
How would it look with thin-red-line border around the picture to match the lights and the white replaced by black? It would really disappear into the night.

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  • Saiz Gold Star Critiquer [C: 909 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-12-11 4:05]

Beautifulllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Antonio

Very impressive capture, the lights give the viewer the sense of mouvement in this picture. Nicely composed and presented.
Vassilis

I like the neon looking colours you have in this shot Peter. You have captured the movement so well with the lighted windows stretching from one side to the other. Also the bars of colour which suggest the movement. I love the blue glow in the sky and the red lights which punctuate this image. Cropping it into a narrow strip enhances the effect you are trying to show. Very nicely done.

This is really neat! Love the colours and the blurred motion.

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  • LuciG Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1286 W: 153 N: 729] (8681)
  • [2005-12-17 7:59]
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HELLO PETER.
I must confess that this picture passed and I didn t notice. I ll certainly make it better for the next time. I hope you don t mind me being late commenting on this picture but all i must say ... this is a perfect shot! You managed to capture the motion wonderfully! the colors are good as well. Congratulations.
Luci

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