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Dark Mystery


Dark Mystery
Photo Information
Copyright: David Lazar (dvlazar) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 52 W: 0 N: 72] (539)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-07-29
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/100 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): FACES: [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-09-03 3:01
Viewed: 633
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 23
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Well Ive been a long time member of TrekEarth (http://www.trekearth.com/members/dvlazar)
but I've decided to upload some of my portrait shots to TrekLens and get involved here too.

I shot this friend of mine indoors with hired studio lighting, with my Nikon D70 one afternoon after shooting another project with her. We are experimenting with the power of veils.
Thanks for any critiques!
-David
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To atomas59: eyesdvlazar 1 11-10 00:37
To rewshearer: Yes and no...dvlazar 3 09-03 17:58
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This is exactly as the title suggests, dark and moody, good sharpness and an excellent expression on the girls face. Nice work.

Hi DL.

Wow...It's good tht you are here too..

A STUNNING IMAGE TO FLY OFF...
Good composition and a fine light balance.

Beauty in Black...
Salutes.

JP

Hi dave,
Fine model and props
Good strong eyes
Maybe a little shift to the left makes it even stronger
RuudBlok

PS
Welcome

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  • jawa Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1372 W: 0 N: 1] (12003)
  • [2007-09-03 10:55]

Hi david
very good mistery portrait.
Gr Jos

Hi David

This shot seems inspired by the work of Manny Librodo, would I be right? It is always useful for critiques if you mention the PP used (although I know Manny never does.)

Good composition, colour, and excellent background here, although I think the PP work is a little heavy, and it can be very difficult getting a decent result with camera-mounted flash, which I think you have used here.

Keep the work coming!
Rew

Hi David...great portrait...the lighting, skin tones and white eyes are great.

Roger

nice shot,good composition, great light

maybe you soften the skin a bit strong, it looks less natural.

good job anyway

Olivier

Hello David,

Wonderful colours and a great job!
Congratulations!
TFS.
Sergio

:) later

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  • Suna Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 42 W: 8 N: 22] (490)
  • [2007-09-20 17:46]

This is also nice one :))

Suna

scary shot ))

Hi David,
This is again a very interesting..portrait? image? Nice lighting, great tones and fine exposure. Love the expressive look on the model's face. The white of the eyes look a bit too white, have they been retouch? But considere it as a minor detail. This is a really good image..))
p.s.I sure will be back, to see your other images, i just don't want to comment on it, all at once.

Hi David,
very interesting Portrait, really original. Excellent composition .. Well done.
Best regards,
-- SADEGH --

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