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Skyfire


Skyfire
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Copyright: ta za (dorien) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 45 W: 2 N: 7] (117)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-06-13
Categories: Nature
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/40 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-02-14 14:34
Viewed: 753
Points: 17
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
An other sunset... one that ill never forget.
On Mindill beach, Darwin, Australia.
Because of the clouds the light became so amazing!

I think I should have taken it a little more to the left to catch some more orange.
And the unsharp foreground is rather big... but I still like it.

What is your opinion?
dorien!
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Discussions
ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To dgusatto: Baliooooooooh!dorien 1 02-22 11:20
To orbiter: Hi John!dorien 1 02-22 11:14
To letr: tiltdorien 1 02-19 05:19
To lucbus: Hi Luc!dorien 1 02-19 05:01
To shyanni: Thank you!dorien 1 02-19 04:57
To Robert: Tnx!dorien 1 02-19 04:52
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Hi Dorien.
You have captured the Australian light very well. I think you could crop the bottom of the fore ground . That area is rather dark and distracts attention from the wonderful sky and the water. TFS.
Best wishes, Robert

This is a luscious sunset! Glorious colors! In the dime-a-dozen world of sunsets, this one is special.

Hi Dorien,
Very beautiful sunset photo. I like this composition but I agree with Robert that you should crop a small part of the bottom to the first line of water removing the blur part. The colors are superb and I like the shape of the clouds in that beautiful sky. Well done.
Luc

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4267 W: 414 N: 6826] (42710)
  • [2006-02-15 6:37]

Hi Dorien

A spectacular sunset, with marvellous color & tonal range. I like the reflections & graphism. Well done!

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  • letr Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1162 W: 419 N: 1111] (6780)
  • [2006-02-16 16:12]
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most of all i like the colorsd and the structures here dorien ..you did well here, maybe I would have tilted the picture a little , ..still a nice shot with excellent colors !!

Leon

Hi Doren! beautiful lanscape. Good color and contrast. Brava!

ciao Dorien!

my opinion is ..u're lucky ! Amazing capture..remember me fantastic sunset in Bali
denis

Hi Dorien,

What a wonderful sunset and an appropriate title, the sky is amazing! May I just suggest a little tweak here. By cropping out the lower third of the image your promoting the main subject (the sky) I feel this helps project your shot.

John

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  • james Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 159 W: 2 N: 91] (392)
  • [2006-02-23 7:27]

Wow very vibrant colors, such a surreal experience. THis is just mesmerizing...thank you for sharing this...james

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