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Through the branches


Through the branches
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Copyright: Claudia Lazar (joeydrops) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 106 W: 3 N: 83] (975)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-01-02
Categories: Daily Life, Nature
Camera: Canon EOS 350D, Canon EF-S 18-55mm 1:3.5-5.6 II
Exposure: f/11, 1/200 seconds
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-01-17 5:36
Viewed: 515
Points: 5
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I took this shot at the Broadwater, Southport, Gold Coast. I liked the delicate branches of the trees with their needle-like leaves and the way the trees were positioned allowing you to peek through at the sandbank in the background.
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  • Needs Improvement 
  • green Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 184 W: 90 N: 209] (2430)
  • [2006-01-17 5:40]

Some potential in this picture but I find it a bit dull. Maybe you should try to rework level and contrast and colour saturation. Have you tried other POV for this scenery?

claudia,
i'd say the shot is a bit dull but nevertheless a well captured composition.like the trees against the blue sky and water.

Hi Claudia,

Overall, I like what you've done here - I was immediately drawn to the delicate branches and pine needles against the blue sky, even in the thumbnail. I think the composition could be stronger though. There doesn't seem to be an obvious focal point for the eye to fall on. Perhaps a vertical composition focusing on one of the trees would have done the trick. I did a quick workshop illustrating what I mean - hope you don't mind.

  • Great 
  • monks Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 48 W: 0 N: 21] (206)
  • [2006-01-19 23:45]

Hey anuty claudia.
So you took this photo at southport. i like it. I think you did a good job, i like how the trees are at the front and the water at the behine.
I see you added the pathway Thats cute. This photo looks like it was taken in the afternoon abit, I like the Tree against that nice blue sky.
Good job.
Later . . . . . . . . !

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