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Ending of a beautiful day


Ending of a beautiful day
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Copyright: Jessica Doub (jessicadoub) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 75 W: 1 N: 72] (538)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-03-11
Categories: Nature
Camera: nikon d40
Photo Version: Final Version, Original Version
Travelogue: The Journey Down Under :)
Date Submitted: 2006-04-04 5:46
Viewed: 905
Points: 16
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Quick Note- I edited this photo taking into consideration the tips provided..I cropped out a portion of the foreground, cloned out people who ended up being cut in half, and intensified the sunset colours. Which do you prefer?

Jessica

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  • edal Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 686 W: 79 N: 631] (4165)
  • [2006-04-04 6:43]
  • [2]

Hi, Jessika!
This is a most wonderful sunset seascape! I like especially the colors!
TFS
Anton

Hi Jessica, I prefer your final version 'cos it's a tighter composition - the original foreground did not add anything to the wonderful sunset colors. As it now stands, the panoramic view emphasises and puts the spotlight on the sunset.

may the good light always be with you,
kc

PS: love your other sunset/sunrises too!

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  • Refugee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4038 W: 426 N: 6693] (23682)
  • [2006-04-04 16:39]
  • [2]

Hi Jessica, I may be old fashioned but I much prefer the original. The semi silhouettes of the people on the beach added a little something. Wonderful perspective anyway with good colourings. A lovely beach is Glenelg, I spent some evenings there way back in the mid 70's. Thanks for sharing,
David
PS Many thanks for your comment on Around Our Garden IV

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  • eyusuf Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 68 W: 14 N: 15] (405)
  • [2006-04-04 18:50]
  • [2]

as you might already know, i like this one better..:)

Jessica,
Absolutely beautiful! I like both versions. I wonder if you could have brought out more foreground light on the original to show the people sitting on the beach instead of cropping them out. Very well composed and stunning colors.
Superb!
Scott

HI JESSICA,

WHAT A FANTASTIC SUNSET AND PIC!
TFS BELLISSIMA!!
DENIS

hi jessica
super coucher de soleil.
toutes ces personnes sur la plage et dans l'eau alors que le soleil s'en va me fait penser qu'il devait faire chaud!
laurent

I like this version very much. The sunset colours are awesome and I love the silhouettes. May I suggest you rotate the image slightly to straighten the horizon as I see a tilt to the right. It is easy to fix and I think well worth a try as this is a very good shot.

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