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Reinterpretation of Detail


Reinterpretation of Detail
Photo Information
Copyright: Konifacio Casuga (Konie) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 348 W: 29 N: 298] (3006)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-04-09
Categories: Architecture
Camera: Canon EOS 350D, Canon EF 28-105mm f/3.5-4.5 II USM, 58mm UV Filter
Exposure: f/3.5, 1/25 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-04-29 6:25
Viewed: 1190
Points: 70
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This photo is a reinterpretation in color of a detail of the roof of the train station in the Olympic Park in Sydney. The original photo taken in raw is in the workshop.
While the raw photo is already interesting, in my humble opinion, because of the lines and curves, I still played with it in my photo editor. What came out is this photo. I hope it merits your attention.
Try comparing it with that in the workshop. Thanks again for viewing.

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  • Plant Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 62 W: 18 N: 46] (970)
  • [2006-04-29 6:37]
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Hi Konifacio, I like this interpretation of the roof with the lines and curves as you say, but also just for the colours themselves, particularly the red and purple colours in the centre portion of the picture. The white frame background is perfect for showing off the colours. I do not like the edge of the frame as much as I think it draws the eye away from the colours in the photograph, that is just my opinion of course. Great work. Paul.

Hi Konifacio,
Excellent work on the RAW photo, the colors are beautiful. The lines in the photo are very good but I would have cropped of the bottom part of the photo so all line run simular.
TFS,
Niek

Very nice shot Konie. Good observation. Great colors and graphical effect...
Tomasz

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  • dada Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 909 W: 46 N: 382] (6560)
  • [2006-04-29 6:51]
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Hi Konie!
wow what a wonderful work! your world is so full of colours and dreams:)

beautiful!
anca

Beautiful compo and colour Konie. Bravo.

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  • jafsc Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 504 W: 53 N: 88] (4621)
  • [2006-04-29 7:18]
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Very good effect in fade colours, curves, transparencies and the whole composition! Thanks Koni!
José

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  • nova Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2733 W: 263 N: 864] (8653)
  • [2006-04-29 8:31]

Wonderful pp work done! This is a nice work of art! Very colorful and attractive! Bravo! Michel

Wonderful arc’s and colours
Divided in a nice arrangement
Good work

Very nice PP work to give a very artistic feel to this nice graphical picture. Personally, I might have cropped a tiny bit at the bottom to eliminate the few standing structure and keep only the curves of the roof. Otherwise, nicely composed and great PP work. Well done!

OOOH, Wonderful colours and capture. TFS,

Impressive! All that colors mix in the real place... Oversaturation or more effect?

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  • Robert Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 219 W: 0 N: 348] (1625)
  • [2006-04-29 19:17]

Hi Konie.

A very unusual perpective of the Olympic Station.I am very impressed with your treatment.Lovely colours and a great selection for the frame.TFS.
Kind regards,
Robert

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  • Viking Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 996 W: 63 N: 782] (4383)
  • [2006-04-30 16:52]

Yes this is a nice combination of colors and lines
I dont like the written name inside the photo!
Good posting
Take care
Rob

nice composition with the shapes and colors konie :)
well seen

points added :)

love the colours Koni

great presentation

jaco

belles couleurs et chouette compo.
Marie

A very good interpretation. The colors complimenting each other with good lines and shapes. Well done

Hi Koni,
Great composition of arc, straight line, and colors. Great PP works. I enjoy viewing this picture [or should I say work of art...]
Thanks 4 sharing it, Koni

Ben Lakitan

Hello,
Good work on the photo. Made it look different. Great composition.

Regards,
Idálio

Hi Konie,
I know where this was taken, you have done an amazing job with this image. I particularly like the composition and colours.
Thanks,
b.

Looking at the original in your workshop gives some idea of what you have achieved with this image. I love the end results. The colour brings the shapes and curves to life. Very creative! Bravo.

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  • jasp Gold Star Critiquer [C: 499 W: 3 N: 7] (3614)
  • [2007-01-08 9:06]

Well done Konifacio... it is like a rainbow.

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  • puffy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1792 W: 128 N: 3006] (16617)
  • [2007-01-12 2:10]

Hi Konie,

Excellent shot, colourful with nice pp work, I like the composition and POV, well done, thanks for sharing

Cheers,
Sweety

Excellent find bro.
The colors are magnificent.

TFS.

I like the composition, Forms ,lines makes more interesting.

Thank you for sharing
Ben

Hi Konifacio,
i like the PP work...
TFS
Amit

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  • MLINES Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1303 W: 96 N: 1023] (8474)
  • [2007-02-18 15:25]

Hi Konie. Excellent sighting and presentation of this roofing at Olympic Park. Looks like a painters pallet of some sort. Well depicted. Murray.

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  • lopa Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1083 W: 244 N: 847] (8927)
  • [2007-02-19 21:33]

Hi Konifacio,
Excellent rainbow coloured roof. I like ur POV. Very impressive treatment.
TFS
Lopa

Great colours in an otherwise boring shot. Looks like heavy-PP, not? Thanx for also showing the original!

My personal preference would be for less of a frame, so we get more of the subject. then put your signature outside the photo in the frame edge...

I have ventured a WS as this is such lovely material to work with! I hope you like!
Thanx for bringing some colour into a gray Nova Scotia day! Jay

Hi Konie!
I like this geometry and color scale combination,it looks very artistic and elegant,interesting choice of POV, it's really great looks more like painting than a photo!

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  • Jeruel Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 114 W: 24 N: 38] (1383)
  • [2007-09-09 18:01]

You are right in your choice of reinterpreting the colors of this roof. Great job! I like it. Candidate for framing and displaying! :)

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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3265 W: 267 N: 7730] (32970)
  • [2007-12-13 0:41]

Very good work here Konie. An BIG difference form the RAW file. I love how the colours have appeared - wll done
Janice

Hi Koni! I love the composition. Lovely perspective with your POV. Very colorful with interesting line patterns. The watercolor effect is very well pp'd. Great work!
Cheers!
Freddie :)

Good definition.
Dennis

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  • ramon Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 272 W: 20 N: 689] (3329)
  • [2009-03-07 7:46]

Hi Konie,

Interesting architectural details.
Brilliant pastel colors, very well composed
and very nice presentation.

Ramon

Very well seen and captured. Beautiful lines.

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