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Cracked
Photo Information
Copyright: Frank Yuwono (biawak) (182)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-03-03
Categories: Abstract
Camera: Canon Powershot A700, Digital
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/200 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-04-14 17:54
Viewed: 443
Points: 14
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
A Cracked window on an old building near our store in Collingwood.
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Interesting effect. Nice colours and textures from the broken glass. Can be a modern artwork.

hello
interesting composition, well seen
regards
jo

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  • tty007 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 209 W: 63 N: 184] (2585)
  • [2007-04-14 21:39]

Pretty cool abstrait photo! Nice colors in the crack of the shatter. Seems like a rock or a bullet that could have done it. You had a good idea to take a shot at this.

Well done. if I had to say anything to improve this image... hum... I could say maybe a little adjustment on the sharpness. Well done! Have a good one!

Excellent cracked window to take a picture of, I really love the various colors that pop out. The buildings and sky are interestingly broken up and made abstract with this broken reflection. Really good with the center of the crack off-center, making this circular shape that leads the eye all around the shot. Great contrasts and really well-seen. I only sense that the noise or saturation is really high on the sky, but considering this is an abstract shot it's not too big of a deal. Thanks for sharing!
-Lara

Like a pic impact! Wow! The color it result make it some abstraction in a modern style! But can i see something? Ok let's say a Pipe Organ Concerto into the Sydney Stadium... As i said it's abstraction... We can imagine reality in a distorted form... But see by yourself... On the left part... The shape remain close up on pipe of an organ... On the right the shape remain me a side view of the shape of that stadium in Sidney :)
I little too weird to imagine perhaps? But i find it well for me :)
Very nice!

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  • Faros Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 136 W: 13 N: 57] (24)
  • [2007-04-15 13:11]

Hi Frank,
Colours and shape made me think of a tropical fish !

Phil.

Hello Frank,this certainly reminds me of a modern piece of art.Very observant of you to notice it and take a shot,it works really well.
I like the fact that they are the primary colours and black.
TFS, regards Jean.

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