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The Wall
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Copyright: David Lazar (dvlazar) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 34 W: 0 N: 37] (271)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-07-29
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/80 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): My favorite portraits II, FACES: [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-09-04 4:05
Viewed: 323
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 22
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
The Wall - A portrait of my friend Amanda.

I shot this indoors with hired studio lighting, with my Nikon D70 one afternoon after shooting a fashion project with Amanda. She is new to modelling but I think handles is quite well and very naturally!
We are experimenting with the use of walls and posing in this shot.
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very nice portrait, great light and composition

TFS

Olivier

Hello David!

Welcome to TL first . What a cool way to introduce yourself and your lady . Definitely a great portrait . I love the tones and colors here. She has superb expression . i like too the narrow DOF with the focus on her eyes.

Have a wonderful journey , on this site !
Soncerely!
Robert

Hi david,
Congratulations...this is a great work
Beautiful model and fantastic lightning!!!
Her look is very interesting.
TFS


Have a great day



Sue

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  • lavan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 531 W: 2 N: 78] (2034)
  • [2007-09-04 6:13]

Nice Observation! Excellent!

The wall which am seeing is over exposed!

Can you give some other name to this photo!

regards,
LavanSJ

Hi nice light and fantastic sharpness and lovely model too...

Cheers!
TFs,
Grace

hi dave!

first off, let me tell you how nice a note you wrote, its short but has all the essential elements in it :)

on to the photo now, well, i congratulate amanda for engaging so perfectly with the camera and the photographer :) she is, indeed, a very beautiful lady :)

i just visited your trekearth gallery, the 'gems' from india and all the other 'great' photos!! for that reason, i've added you as one of my favorites on trek!

the composition is wonderful, i like the frame, though i am not a great fan of even lighting, but this one looks good anyway...

take care and have a great day dave :)

muhammad muhsin

Hi DL.

KUDOS TO YOU, DEAR DAVID AND TO AMANDA..

Fascinating..

jean paul

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  • timtim Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 884 W: 71 N: 364] (6646)
  • [2007-09-04 18:17]

great shot nice lighting and colour

Hi David,

great Photo. nice colors and good lighting and shadows. love to see POV here and model pose and expression.
this photo good for commercial ad.
very well done and tfs

Haldian

Hi David..nice shot. You do a great job with composition as well as black and white tones...nice work.

Roger

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  • gnada Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1928 W: 59 N: 1815] (11561)
  • [2007-09-08 6:49]

Hello David... Welcome to “TL”

She's beautiful and you've captured this shot so well.
Congratulations, George

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