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Allure
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Copyright: David Lazar (dvlazar) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 34 W: 0 N: 37] (271)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-07-29
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/200 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-09-05 3:11
Viewed: 433
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 28
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
From a shoot i did recently with Amanda.
This shot was originally quite different - ive cropped in close and rotated it quite significantly. She was blowing smoke at the time as part of the effect... and I've done a bit of color and exposure work in post.

Hope you like it.

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I love the toning of this photo with beautiful composition. Sharp as well. :D

Nice capture!

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  • nadir Silver Star Critiquer [C: 10 W: 0 N: 0] (317)
  • [2007-09-05 3:58]

nice portrait,nice composition

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  • juta Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 139 W: 20 N: 103] (1650)
  • [2007-09-05 4:19]

dvlazar,
Really a fantastic shot, very elegant, well presented and well framed - could never succeed in such a genre...
TFS,
Best regards,
JUTA

very nice heigh key portrait. interesting pov

TFS

Olivier

Beautiful model, beautiful photo, good work! Congratulations!

HI David
Like the smoke on your portrait noramaly I hate it
Your very good on photographing they eyes
Maybe a bit to mutch noise reduction (not sure)
But it is excelent work
RuudBlok

Hi David...I like the shot...especially the angle and the cropping...nice job.

Roger

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  • mark25 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 282 W: 4 N: 525] (3244)
  • [2007-09-05 13:14]

hi dave!

though this photo is on the virge of losing its charm because of the heavy post processing, but it is amanda's expression and beauty, that saves it!

what i noticed about you, in all honesty, is that you, despite being an excellent photographer, resort to touch-up's in your portraits... it disappoints me a little, but thats only my two cents!

your photos are still very enjoyable and well done, but i belong to the purist school of thought, where post processing exists but the framing and composition must be right in the first place :)

hope you find my comment useful and valuable :)

thanks for sharing :) amanda is really very beautiful :)

muhammad muhsin

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  • timtim Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 902 W: 71 N: 372] (6752)
  • [2007-09-05 14:23]

great comp and colour

hi david,

congratulations for all ur photos here on TL and on TE as well!they are amazing!
i like this portrait,too!u found a beautiful model;);)and the composition is great!

nice work!
TFS
Willienda

Hi David,

Amazing capture, my friend!! I like the skin tones and expression on her face. Nice POV. TFS

Kiran.

Hi David,
This erally is an alluring shot. Nice post work and the rotation seems to work well. Cheers, Paul.

I like this, nice lighting, great tones, and detail
Regards
Philippa

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