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Concern


Concern
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Copyright: David Lazar (dvlazar) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 34 W: 0 N: 37] (271)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-07-29
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/80 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-10-16 17:48
Viewed: 340
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 16
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This photo is portraying the emotion of 'concern'. I set scene simply with some lighting and a blank wall, and Amanda tried to pose subtly yet evocatively.
Some color has been desaturated, and a vignette to the edges has been applied.
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I love the look and the model is perfect for the shot you did a good job here :-)

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  • dareco Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1029 W: 14 N: 563] (9216)
  • [2007-10-16 18:12]

This is VERY beautiful!! How I wish I could learn to take a portrait like this. I love the coloring and her eyes are really great! TFS

Nice lighting, details, expression, and POV.
Well done David!
Thanks for sharing,
Leanne

Great lighting and detail, it also gives a feeling of mystery I believe. TFS

Hi David
It's a lovely portrait ... beautiful light, textures, details, and a beautiful model.

I'm not entirely convinced that 'concern' is the emotion expressed - and it's a difficult one to do without overdoing it. I almost wonder if she was too concerned with looking good, to look concerned!?

Regardless of that fact, her eyes are mesmerising and really dominate this shot: great work!

Rew

Hi,
I am not sure why but I like this picture. May be for colours, for the soft edges, may be for the misty touch.
Nice picture
susanahh

Hello David,
IMO, you achieved your goal: I can see the concern in her expression.
I like your set-up, the lighting and the way the shadows give "depth" to your model's face. Everything seems perfect to me.
TFS & kind regards,
Erik

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  • timtim Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 941 W: 71 N: 379] (6982)
  • [2007-10-17 13:57]

great portrait
nice PP

Good to see you here at TL David. I had a quick stroll on your gallery and I am impressed with your portraits. This one has impressive lighting and your model is beautiful. A good one. Danilo

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