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~ The Line of Sight ~


~ The Line of Sight ~
Photo Information
Copyright: Alaettin KI (TasmaniaC) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 954 W: 190 N: 920] (5116)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-07-15
Categories: Daily Life, Nature, HPP [Heavily Post-Processed]
Camera: Panasonic Lumix DMC-FZ30, 62mm Linear Polariser
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2007-11-14 13:31
Viewed: 545
Points: 52
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Line of Sight: An imaginary line from the eye to a perceived object.

This photo was taken on The Snowy Mountains Highway between Tumut and Talbingo on a warm winter afternoon..

PP Talk: I have tried HDR on this photo, hope you'll like it.. I know that the sky does not look that at its best but I din not know how to fix it :))

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ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To puffy: You are on...TasmaniaC 2 01-31 02:38
To EOSF1: You are not..TasmaniaC 1 11-17 16:27
To Refugee: All I can hope..TasmaniaC 1 11-15 13:55
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Nice HDR Alaettin, good colour and detail.

Regards Mark :)

This looks like a Photomatix tone mapping
But not a real good one
Some areas are a bit dark
Ruud

Hi Alaettin
I am not a big fan of certain effects but here it works fine. Good experiment that turned out as a excellent presentation with the diagonals (road and painted lines). Well seen. TFS

Paul

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  • Nikas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 368 W: 2 N: 92] (1880)
  • [2007-11-14 17:30]

Hi!

I liked very much oh this work!! The colours are great, good composition!

Regards
Ana

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  • jackal Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 158 W: 1 N: 86] (1298)
  • [2007-11-14 18:50]

Hi Alaettin,
The HDR works well in the foreground and highlights the colours of the leaves but the sky is too dark. A good PoV with the white line leading into the distance
cheers
Jack

Excellent POV and capture of these Poplar trees. Looks a little out of focus but a nice photo nonetheless. TFS.

regards,

Martyn

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3301 W: 663 N: 1895] (15853)
  • [2007-11-15 0:29]

Nice to see you around !
Maybe the sky is a bit "dirty" but is a great compo anyway.

thnaks,
v

great work.
nice contras and sharp, also colors tone.
thx for sharing
Haldian

Hello Alaettin, The composition is superb, love the low perspective. Tech details are good, intriguin pp work. Greetings, Danilo
be back

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  • Tomek Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1185 W: 35 N: 1975] (11258)
  • [2007-11-15 4:17]

Splendid composition - really impressing. Tall trees make it all.
May be to much noise but it look nice anyway.
Cheers - Tom
:) later

Different Alettin, is this a merge of more than one image or just tonal mapping? Good colour and light and the grain adds a nice effect. A pretty part of NSW which I spent a fair bit of time in when living in the ACT. TFS,
David

Many thanks for your comment on ‘No More’. Let us now wait and see if Gunns come up with the finance for their mill, some banks are wavering.

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  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1388 W: 122 N: 1975] (16695)
  • [2007-11-16 9:30]
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Hello Alaettin, very good composition and sharpness in this great scene. You've done a good job on the lighting and exposure. About the HDR, I have never done one myself yet but I'm not sure about them, I have yet to see one that looks natural. On your pic the sky around the trees is lighter than the part in the middle. It doesn't do a bad picture but it does not look natural IMHO. Well done , thanks !

Mario

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  • starky Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 323 W: 2 N: 43] (2748)
  • [2007-11-16 14:25]

Hi Alaettin.Nice landscape and diagonal line.Beautiful colours and composition.
Regards, Bosko.

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  • tibig Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 627 W: 25 N: 594] (6615)
  • [2007-11-17 3:05]

Nice HDR experiment, though the glow around the trees is a bit disturbing.
TFS,
Tibi

Merhaba Alaaddin,
Çapraz ve vertikal çizgiler grafik etki sağlamış.
Çizgiler insanı bir yere doğru çekip götürüyor.
Başarılı bir çalışma. Selamlar
Selahattin E

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  • harpya Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5080 W: 178 N: 5971] (31753)
  • [2007-11-18 4:34]

Hello Alaettin

Fantastic visual in HDR.
I have been appreciating and a lot of theses works in HDR.
for his beauty that he turns them the landscapes.
Beautiful visual and capture, very good taste in finishing him in this style.
Congratulations

Sérgio
p**

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  • AJ786 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 778 W: 59 N: 1046] (6669)
  • [2007-11-19 2:40]

Hi my friend.

Nice POV, great details and beautiful composition.

TFS

Cheers
AJ786
:-)

merhaba sevgili dostum
harika bir komposizyon ve manzara.güzel derinlik.ne zaman gelmeye niyetin var.
sevgilerimle.
gürkan akçakır.

Merhaba Alaettin abi.
Perspektifi çok etkili bir şekilde kullanmışsın, yol çizgisinin sol alt köşeden girişi çok etkili olmuş.
Tonlar güzel olmuş, başarılı bir HDR çalışması olmuş bence.
Ellerine ve gözlerine sağlık.
Saygı ve selamlarımla.

Yasin.

Hi nice shot
the effect is nice but so it looks maybe a bit to much unrealistic
but good job
very good pov and nice scenery
Toba

Hello Alaettin,

Nice POV and perspective in this photo.
Good colors and light. TFS

Vandana
later

Hi Alaeettin

Nice prespective and HDR work well here....congrats

Amri HMS

Hi Alaettin,

Great shot and great pp work, not that I know how to do HDR just yet, but this look great! I like the nice pov and colours here. Especially the white line is leading my eyes towards the never ending road. :D I have tried to "fix" your sky for you but not sure if that's what you want, do let me know if I am in the right track.

Cheers,
Sweety

Very Australian, Alaettin. I do like the POV. Seems to have been the last one with your FZ30? - Cordelia :))

güzel bir kare olmuş verdiği derinlik hissi harika,ayrıca renkler de çok naturel........tfs

Hi Alaettin,
Nice shot from that angle,
Nicely focused,
Great PP work,
Good job,
TFS....

avustralya fotograflarına bakmak çok zevkli...
(bir psikiyatrist için sayfandaki yumurta fotografların ise ilgi çekici:)
(turkiyede sabaha yakın bir saatte gözüme uyku girmediğinden
fotografla bari iletişim kurmaya çalıştıgım ve sen de üşenmeyip o fotografa kritik yazmakla kalmayıp,bir de güzeller güzeli WS yaptıgın için minnettarım.)
selamlar

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