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Yellow Faced Honey Eater


Yellow Faced Honey Eater
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Copyright: Mark Smallman (waminda2020) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 85 W: 2 N: 10] (293)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-03-27
Categories: Nature
Exposure: f/8, 1/125 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-03-27 13:38
Viewed: 409
Points: 1
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I took this photo at Berkeley Reserve.
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To ls_photography: Leannewaminda2020 1 04-25 17:04
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Hello Mark,
The DOF is ok, it's not exactly razor sharp as what is preferred for this type of shot.
To make this shot a bit different or interesting, you may try a different crop by making the subject off-centered. The colors are pretty good, as well as the lighting.
To make the subject pop out more, you could blur some of the BG and foreground, and add contrast.

Just a few suggestions! Hope this helps. I did a small workshop as well Mark.
TFS
Leanne

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