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Sound of Silence


Sound of Silence
Photo Information
Copyright: David Gumprich (Refugee) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4185 W: 447 N: 7043] (24931)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-04-25
Categories: Transportation, Decisive Moment, Mood
Camera: Olympus C-760 UZ
Exposure: f/3.5, 1/200 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Friday Theme 2008/06/06 "Sound", My photos > 100, Friday Themes [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-06-05 1:09
Viewed: 616
Favorites: 3 [view]
Points: 122
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Relative silence has been a part of my life for coming up ten years now through deafness caused by industrial noise. Every so often I wear my hearing aids when I venture out on photography sessions just so I can hear the birds and the sound of rushing water, the plus side is no traffic noise or very muted anyway.

This image was taken the same day as Beijing Bound but later in the morning. The fog was still around as the workshop will testify but in this case I preferred the stronger colours. Thanks once again to Helen for coming up with the ideas.


PP Work - PSP X

Adjust - Colour - Fade Correction - 45
Adjust Hue and Saturation - Hue Map - Saturation shift 15, lightness shift -5
Adjust levels
Adjust Add/Remove Noise - Edge Preserving Smooth - 2
Cropped, added border and saved
Re opened and added the text

One of the greatest sounds of them all - and to me it is a sound - is utter, complete silence ~ Andre Kostelanetz

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Hello David! Fantastic picture. Good POV, very good composition. Amazing effect. Very original shot. Good luck!

Hi David,
Great title! Nice cristal clear picture, perfect vivid colours of the boat and the reflection is syuperb to. Also the composition is well balanced and creates a nice peaceful mood. Excellent contribution to the theme!
Hans

Hello Dear David
A superb capture.
Yes the ambience in the image does look very very serene and still...as if even the wind is not moving.
Great shot.
TFS

Silence - yes nowadays they try to enforce wearing protective earphones on your head when working in noisy industries, however a lot of young people ignore it (probably already partly deaf by too loud music in their earphones).
This really looks like the sound of silence, can you call this water also a Sound?
I'm amazed as to how you managed to lift the fog with PP work. This also makes a very attractive picture with all those different colours on the boat.

TFS
Els

Amazing with beautiful colors
Thank you for sharing
Kind reaards
Elena

hello David
excellent post against sound. good thought, yes you are right the view looks very calm, lovely reflection
good colours

regards
Manuj Mehta

An eerie silence David, you certainly have captured the stillness.
Good idea to crop the top of the bridge, any traffic would have spoiled the moment, TFS.
Pete.

Hello David!
Lovely composition for Fridays theme and nice title!
Beautiful reflection, great ambiance!
Best regards!
Lili

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3342 W: 681 N: 1922] (16089)
  • [2008-06-05 1:43]

Everybody seem to love the song with this title and at least think of it for the theme.
Some of us really added it to the theme ...
Wonderful capture of this calmness.

thanks,
v

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  • juyona Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2458 W: 0 N: 861] (13152)
  • [2008-06-05 1:47]

Hola amigo,
hermoso trabajo,
líneas y reflejos sugerentes.
pov. y encuadre magnífico.
saludos David

Merhaba
Perfect work. Well done. Very nice reflactions.

Kerem

Hi David,
beautiful and very peacefull photo, lovely BG and superb refletion, a superb shot!
LuDivine

Olá David,
Yes, the silence is the best sound.
Great shot my friend, calm and beautiful. Nice colors and details, nice reflections.
Cheers
Raimundo

Hello David, my old friend,
I've come to talk with you again,
Because a vision softly creeping,
Left its seed whilst I was sleeping,
And the vision that was planted in my brain,
Still remains ....

Just love it!
One of my favourite songs!
One of my favourite shots!

I'm going to put this in my favourites.
You have captured here something that city dwellers must yearn for!!

Kind regards,
Bev :-)

Many thanks for your warm comments on 'Cherry Blossom Time'.

Beautifully done! The stillness is tangible and I can see that a scene like this would be better in relative silence anyway - traffic would ruin it!

I love your use of the bridge as a framing element. Perfect placement of the boat. Excellent metering and contrast. All stunning!

Rew

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  • dareco Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1136 W: 15 N: 597] (10183)
  • [2008-06-05 2:34]

A very beautiful composition!! The framing is excellent including abit of the bridge overhead. The colors are really awesome! I love this! TFS and have a great day!

What a lovely shot with a good mood, clarity and colour is great. Very well composed.
Best wishes,
Achim

Hi David,
This is a fantastic posting ... very good depth and contrast. I like how you captured this sombre atmosphere.... very good use of low lighting. The bridge is a real bonus ... not only did it gave framing but its reflections added dimension to the scene. Excellent work! tfs
Cheers,
Renier

hi David
the mood of this wonderful image is really peace and quite, absolutely no-sound.
amazing pp work on the reflections.
original addition to theme.
tfs
tsilla

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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3183 W: 224 N: 6855] (27193)
  • [2008-06-05 3:03]

It does look calm and peaceful David - silence - no loud sounds.
I like the reflections.
Janice

hello David,

shhhhh.. ill just make this short and quietly commenting because i don't want to disturb the sound of silence that is so peaceful here.. you did a good job presenting this lovely subject on tranquility view.. well done..

regards, terry :D

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  • Mitra Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1451 W: 75 N: 814] (7236)
  • [2008-06-05 4:21]

beautiful and very peaceful photo, lovely BG and superb reflection. Well done.
Mitra

Hiya David

Awesome :-)

Peaceful poetic and pretty... I love the way the bridge naturally frames this lovely scene. Very well suited to the title.

TFS and for joining in the theme
kind regards Helen

Hello David,
Superb composition highlighted by the water reflection. The boat is positioned well in the frame, and indeed one gets the feeling of silence. (I also wear a hearing aid on my left ear which was damaged from attending too many noisy live concerts when I was younger. Many thanks for your email response re: joggers/walkers from your previous posting). Greetings, Danilo

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  • WMcK Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 731 W: 8 N: 1662] (6410)
  • [2008-06-05 5:24]

Even with out the fog, my friend of many faces, this is stunning. I love the reflections and clarity of the image. Beautiful colour and detail with super composition. Wonderful. I agree with you the sound of silence is my favorite one too. Great for theme.
Warm Regards
Wanda

Bom dia David


Sailor you made silence speak.

my regards

Teresat

Hello David,
Beautiful, and yes..this is most beautiful sound :)
Excellent composition, details and mood. TFS
Vandana

Wow! Excellent shot. Great composition, lighting and relfection. Very interesting shot.
Well done
Ed

Bonjour David,
Belle prise de vue de bateau, Excellent POV, and details, nice reflections and well presented and composed picture , nice perpective of bridge and Très jolie photo,,
Amicalement
Michel

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  • ttreen Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1576 W: 118 N: 3599] (14407)
  • [2008-06-05 7:11]

Hello David
Very nice.. the boat is so perfect on the calm water! The colors are so nice as well....

Tricia

Beautiful shot.
Excellent PP work to bring back the colors.
Excellent composition on the shot
TFS
Pierre

Hi David
Great idea , Excellent composition and for the friday theme.
Well done.TFS.
Greetings

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  • Silke Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3365 W: 284 N: 6425] (23856)
  • [2008-06-05 10:20]

There is something about the liken textures of this that makes it especially appealing!
Superb colours and composition too
TFs
silke

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  • tibig Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 644 W: 25 N: 627] (7047)
  • [2008-06-05 10:43]

Tranquil and well composed image. You are at your best here.
Regards,
Tibi

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  • clic Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 708 W: 0 N: 156] (4053)
  • [2008-06-05 11:57]

Hello David
My attention focuses on the faithful moored companion and its reflexion on the calm river because it's isolated by a dark backdrop and the frame of bridge.
Of course, this peaceful scenery is an appeal to meditation!
Cheers.
Robert

Got to be one of my ALL TIME Favorites of yours David!! Outstanding CLOSE shot of these gorgeous boat! The reflections are REALLY super nice! Love the dark water here! Excellent contribution!
B-)
Linda

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  • mbrito Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1064 W: 62 N: 1397] (5744)
  • [2008-06-05 13:04]

Hello David,
Back to the water. Beautiful capture very well captured and very well composed. Wonderful work.
Have a good «we», mb

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  • viawia Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 506 W: 32 N: 881] (3571)
  • [2008-06-05 13:32]

David - What a wonderful image. I can relate so well to this being 100% deaf also...YOur image speaks to me and reminds me that I am happy to SEE so much beauty ...
TFS I will continue in this note (lol pun intended) in my contribution to the theme..

Wia

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  • wilth Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 269 W: 36 N: 371] (1426)
  • [2008-06-05 14:50]

Good title, interesting note and great basic shot with the pp work just making it a stunner.
Great job,
Thanks for sharing,
Wilt

More than beautiful photo painting. Classic work.

A beauty Dave
Neat clean photo stuff
The sort of 'roof' framing done by lower bridge is a clever adition,
Greetings

John

This one is so beautiful! Great peaceful composition. Perfect reflections in the water. Excellent colors and atmosphere. Everything in the proper place. Amazing.

Lorena

hi David

Today I was thinking about this theme and the Bell of Liberty at Philadelphia with a title of Sound of Silence, but then I do not have such a photo and not entering the theme.

When I see your title, bang! That is a great one, and your photo is a great shot for it, with such a peaceful reflection on water and the arch at top, using bridge as top frame. The boat idle at the right spot of thirds. Simply great work.

tfs, bill

Beautiful shot David, like the composition, looks so peaceful.

That must have been some noise you were subjected to.

All the Best
Gil

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  • harpya Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5221 W: 180 N: 6189] (32661)
  • [2008-06-06 5:46]

Hello David,


a beautiful look and perfect theme for this
Sound of the silence. you look contrasts, you post
a theme of calm and calm sound, dew.
I post totally I contradict him of yours, a great uproar. ahaha!.........
Beautiful visual and composition my dear!
Congratulations for the beautiful post.

Sérgio
:)

hi, nice shot with a calm atmosphere, very good composition with the boat position and the bridge along the top edge, nice contrast and details

rgds
Allen

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 973 W: 0 N: 753] (8411)
  • [2008-06-06 13:50]

I can almost here the song of Simon and Garfunkel with it Dave.,sssstttttt......
jan

Nice contrast. Good exposure and pleasant composition.

TFS,
Pedro

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  • kbeall Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 577 W: 112 N: 901] (3542)
  • [2008-06-06 18:26]

Hi David,
This is a perfect composition with good detail and captivating reflections. Colors, background . . . mesmerizing. What is shrouded around the cabin of the boat? Is it some kind of mosquito netting?
A silent world . . . I have worked closely with the deaf, and can sign fairly fluently. If I had to choose to relinquish one of my senses, it would be hearing, but how I would miss music, birds, the sound of familiar voices. You seem to have made the best of it, and have a very positive outlook.
Best regards,
Karen

Hello David,

This is a great composition with many fine elements!
The boat is nicely placed in the frame, captured with sharp fine details...
The image has a great sense of depth, and the subtle reflections add beauty!

Greetings,
Pablo -

:-) OK-

Hi David,

Golden moment while everything is silent . .
Beautiful presentation showing the nature and lovely environment here . .
Great shot my friend . . as usual you did great capturing the silent moment . . reflection and the fog . .

Tfs,
Tjutjut

Hello David,

Very beautiful and peaceful scene, excellent composed. I like the color tones and the way you framed this, using the bridge. A wonderful contribution to the theme.
Best regards,
Sorina

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Wow! superb! With the bridge framing at the top, great clarity in the image. Very good pov and well composed.
I like to follow the river through the image.

Great work as always.

cheers :)

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3048 W: 568 N: 3412] (15117)
  • [2008-06-11 19:59]

Hi David,
I join the chorus! This is a wonderful photo with a superb composition and a good sense of space! The colors and reflection are your signature! My compliments! Annie

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  • MLINES Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1171 W: 90 N: 943] (6565)
  • [2008-06-16 18:33]

Hi David, This is beautiful. The title fits and the cropping is very good. Your photos of this area are a treat. I never tire of them. TFS. Murray.

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  • linus Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1429 W: 12 N: 687] (9376)
  • [2008-06-23 5:37]

Hi David,
Lovely image. I am not sure if the bridge adds to the photo or not. The sense of silence is overwhelming here.
Good capture.
Sunil

really fantastic work. excellent treatment. just amazing,

Hi David...I like this shot...nice composition with nice cotrast between the foreground and background...nice work.

Roger

Hi David,
Beautiful composition,good silence.
Ralf

Hi David!

Great work, very different! It's a wonderful place, nice colors, good reflections!

TFS,
Chris

Good Morning David,
These are for sure my favorite photos coming from your way , the stillness of the water, misty air and wavering reflections all make up the photo you were wanting to portray, stillness/silence...its beautiful..........
TFS
Donna:o)

Hello David,it is the colours that appeal to me in this shot.
And the sharp quality that you have achieved.
The composition is spot on, if you had had the boat anywhere else, it wouldn't have felt right; the mast needed the space above it.
I like the crop with the arch of the bridge just framing the scene.
Tfs, regards Jean.

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