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Enjoying a day at the bay


Enjoying a day at the bay
Photo Information
Copyright: Claudia Lazar (joeydrops) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 106 W: 3 N: 83] (975)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-11-05
Categories: Friends/Family, Mood, Portrait
Camera: Canon EOS 350D, Canon EF-S 18-55mm 1:3.5-5.6 II
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/800 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2005-11-06 7:08
Viewed: 789
Points: 16
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is a photo of my lovely niece Monika (She and her brother are also on TrekLens (monks)) We were enjoying a nice day at Jacob's Well, watching the boats coming in and out and also some pelicans, which were entertaining us.

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Hello Claudia
Wonderfull natural light and nice composition. Simple.

Regards
Richard

YOU have captured a very good shot, nice angle, very good POV, and a nice composition, It highlights the true bay spirit.
Congrats, TFS.

Regards
Yasir nisar

Hi Claudia, great portrait with good light.

Well done !

Marleen
sorry out of greens

nice portrait
good details, colors and DOF

Hi Claudia!!
Wonderful shot!
She is beautiful and have good expression!
Good DOF, light and background!
TFS!

Hello Claudia !


Cute little niece. Nice tribute to her. I am sure she likes this one. I like the composition. I just made a correction to the luminosity in order to see better her eyes. As an indication, of what I am talking about, Check the WS , and let me know your comments. You can do the same work perhaps with your original and reframe it .
Cheers!
Robert

Good portrait Claudia, focussing on Monika and blurring the background. very good photo.
jaco

Nice shot with the wind blowing gently her hair.
Good DOF.
Her face is nicely lit by the sun.

Well done.
Tom

Very beautiful portrait of Monika, a beautiful lady!
Sergio

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