<< Previous Next >>

A Mother's Hands


A Mother's Hands
Photo Information
Copyright: Cadi Meder (kdm078) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 63 W: 16 N: 25] (344)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2007
Categories: Mood
Camera: Cosina C1 SLR
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-02-07 1:44
Viewed: 212
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
None
Add Critique [Critiquing Guidelines] 
Only registered TrekLens members may write critiques.
Discussions
ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To Janice: Cosinakdm078 3 02-08 13:22
You must be logged in to start a discussion.

Critiques [Translate]

Kia ora Cadi
Welcome to TrekLens. But what is a Cosina C1 SLR?
This is an interesting image, with the lady sewing on a button. I like your composition, but I wonder if the button and the fingers should be a bit sharper, especially on her right hand as the emphasis is on those fingers. . .
I like the colour tone too,
Thank you for sharing
Janice

  • Great 
  • ade71 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 235 W: 37 N: 206] (2812)
  • [2009-02-07 8:20]

Hi Cadi, welcome on TL. I think the picture is very interesting but I agree with Janice. Good the B & W. Ciao, Adele

Hi Cadi!
For me this one works! I think you don't need always a sharpen point in the photo. This photo talks about a moment, a slow moment full of details that remake the atmosphere of it. The unsharp fingers is the consequence of the little fine movements that a expert hand need to get a good sewing. This is really delicious for my eyes.
This shot is not a frozen moment, it has movement, over and over again... until she will end the button! ;)
Un saludo y bienvenido,
Edén

Calibration Check
















0123456789ABCDEF