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Copyright: Jack McGrane (jackal) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 311 W: 3 N: 217] (2895)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-01-05
Categories: Experimental, HPP [Heavily Post-Processed]
Camera: Pentax K10D, Cokin Grad. ND 4
Exposure: f/22, 5 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-09-13 20:07
Viewed: 219
Points: 28
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I have taken a few shots at this spot in Milford but its different each time.

This was a RAW image that I exposed once for the Sky, once for the sea and once for the rocks. Instead of merging them using an HDR programme I combined them using layers in PS. Some layers I deleted bits and other parts I changed the opacity - the ldea was to get the full range without the HDR effect.

RAW ISO100 F22 5sec + Grad ND4

The original is posted in the WS

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What a stunning effort that has really paid off. Love the descriptive notes and the skill in getting all the exposure to merge like this requires extreme patience and you have really pulled of a beaut mate! The composition is perfect and my congrads. Thanks for sharing such great work. Well done!

cheers,

dilshan74

hi jack
great image,good detail in the fore-ground the sea looks dream-like and the colourful sky loos great,well done
regards
jimmy

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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3282 W: 268 N: 7782] (33214)
  • [2009-09-13 22:58]
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Oh Jack, another awesome sunrise from you!!
Now, WHERE at Milford beach are you? That's the beach where I grew up. Is this closer to Takapuna? Black Rock area?
Well composed image, and your PP work is perfect... I am impressed
Cheers
Janice

HI Jack

i'm liking your beautiful capture, nice details ,nice PS work great photo.

DK

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  • KBE Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 456 W: 103 N: 597] (2759)
  • [2009-09-13 23:09]
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Hello Jack
This is a nice capture, i certainly like the colors in the sky!
The treatment u've chosen to show the hidden details (full range), IMO it didn't work perfectly here.

There is still a major part which is quite a dark!
To avoid doing HDR in any program i some times use Image overlay option in-camera effects!

All u need to do is to take photos in RAW and then apply image overlay n there u get single RAW file (thats i do on my Nikon not sure what Pentax has to offer :))

TFS
Cheers
JZM

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  • carmia Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 274 W: 6 N: 126] (3286)
  • [2009-09-13 23:28]

Hi Jack, beautiful very beautiful picture, pleasant texture and color. Congrats. TFS. Carme.

j'aime cette mer toute blanche... je ne sais pas faire...

bravo Jack,


dd, île de la Réunion

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  • A-lex Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 132 W: 54 N: 255] (2142)
  • [2009-09-14 4:14]

Hi Jack!

Wonderful photo!
The sky is beautiful and the water is 'smokey'
Well done

Alex

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  • tafa Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 180 W: 12 N: 169] (1690)
  • [2009-09-14 4:17]

hi
Jack
This one is my prefered in your gallery but it was not easy to make a choice!
SASO
...MACEDONIA...

Hi Jack,

the work you've don was worth the result! I love it - it's so well saturated, has so good light in almost every spot. Not even speaking of the compo which leads perfetly from the left bottom to the center and right of the shot. The only thing to omit is the distant light on the other shore - it looks rather like an unwanted artifact, than the distant light spot. Anyways the work is beautiful! Thanks for the interesting note! tfs

Marek

Hi Jack...great shot...well composed...nice tones and details.

Roger

Hi Jack,
A wonderful sunset view and excellent shot with perfect PP. Beautiful sky and the foggy water, nice black mountain and fine POV creates one wonderful stage and excellent mood.
Great work.

Best regards,
Alex

Bonjour Jack
A wonderful result indeed.HDR treatment has improved the original image which,yet, was not bad at all.Very good pov, timing and ppwork.
Henri

Hi Jack
impressive gallery :)
i stopped at this one because caught my attention
excellent pp work
the smoothness of the water gives a peaceful atmosphere
also the tonal range is splendid
nice silhouettes and sharpness with a clean DOF
Have a grate day!
Oana

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1403 W: 0 N: 1709] (13741)
  • [2009-09-15 13:05]

Well Jack to be honest,this looks very impressie and it has a great kind of mood,but I miss some sharpness.

jan

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