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Aleena having fun


Aleena having fun
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Copyright: darren sharp (darren4) Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 24 W: 0 N: 58] (662)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-09-26
Categories: Action
Camera: Canon 5D Mark ll, 70-200mm f2.8L IS USM, 72mm Canon UV Filter
Exposure: f/3.2, 1/1250 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-09-26 12:54
Viewed: 160
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This was shot yesterday at the pools, I got her to jump up high and she smiled and I was able to capture it.
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  • bupga Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 300 W: 6 N: 361] (2685)
  • [2009-09-26 13:06]

Nice shot Darren, the droplets of water freezed well. Though, I would have go for smaller aperture to have more details. Well captured.

tfs.....Buddy

Hi Darren,
I really like this shot.
Perfect timing, I think you should added decisive moment to the categorie, cause it trully one. Did you shot this inside or outdoor, I think it could be a tad (half stop) darker, it would bring a little more details to the highlights. You could also adding a little yellow, it would warm the image a touch little magenta/blue cast present (if shot inside, probably the result of halogene lights). All of those are minor tho.

I really like the expression on that little girl face, and the mouvement make this shot a great capture. Nice job, really.
Cheers

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