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Out of Focus
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Copyright: Dawn McKenzie Wykes (Dawn) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1134 W: 100 N: 3364] (17540)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-10-10
Categories: Nature, Experimental
Camera: Canon EOS 30D, Canon EF-S 17-85 f/4-5.6 IS USM, Heliopan UV
Exposure: f/7.1, 1/125 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Vandana's Favorites II [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-01-28 19:15
Viewed: 817
Favorites: 2 [view]
Points: 56
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Another Out of Focus experiment...we are to present an Out of Focus photo to our photo club next month, and I have been playing with some filters, here I have applied the Radial blur, then sharpened slightly.

What do you think fellow Trekers ?

Like to hear your comments/critques.

Thanks
Dawn

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ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To puffy: out of focusDawn 1 02-06 23:39
To eyesthetix: thank uDawn 1 02-06 14:18
To ttreen: giftDawn 2 01-29 16:13
To boonie: FilterDawn 1 01-29 13:49
To Silke: panicDawn 3 01-29 11:04
To Janice: Panic...Dawn 2 01-29 02:15
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  • timtim Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1053 W: 106 N: 564] (9598)
  • [2008-01-28 19:29]

Beautiful image nice soft BG and sharp forground details
great colours

Hello !

Sweet composition and colorful image. the soft focus is indeed very effective here. Well done Dawn.

Cheers!
Robert

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  • eosnut Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 588 W: 165 N: 1406] (10181)
  • [2008-01-28 20:03]

Yep, this is a goodun, the soft focus works so well with the poppies colours.
I would give this honours on a club night.
Cheers,
Pete.

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3322 W: 789 N: 4436] (19970)
  • [2008-01-28 20:10]

Hi Dawn,
Delightful photo! Soft focus enhances so well the delicacy of these poppies. Artistically done! Annie

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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3281 W: 268 N: 7782] (33212)
  • [2008-01-28 20:51]
  • [+]

This is a good one Dawn. Are you beginning to panic - yet?
The FG poppy stands out so beautifully against teh blurred BG. Nicely composed MF
Janice

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  • linus Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1477 W: 10 N: 738] (10767)
  • [2008-01-28 21:22]

Hi Dawn,
Beuatiful composition. Very creative and artistic.
Sunil

hi dawn, i really think its a very pretty effect, very beautiful indeed, i just love the pov,dof and colors,
good job,
thanks, scott

Nice colours and perfect composition.
I like it. Nil.

Hi Dawn,

Beautiful simple, but well looking composition. Lovely colours and play's with DoF. Well done & TFS :]

Greetings from Poland,
Pawel

Hi Dawn, I do like it and think it fits the criteria very well. The pattern of the stalks, vibrant colours and the one flower "in Focus". Yes, I would think it is a honours. Well done!
Pat.

Hello Dawn.
Not bad itall. Maybe even a bt more blur from the backline flowers.
The beautiful colour combination makes the picture.
Well done. Cheers from Jan

Hello Dawn,

I don't know why I love this image . . It's blur but lovely color and composition . .
You did great framing this image with black frame . .
Beautiful

Tfs,
Tjutjut

Just come across this Dawn, very nice I do like the out of focus or blur composition.

The colours are beautiful.

Thanks

Gil.G

Hello Dawn!
Fantastic composition!!!!!
Great blur effect and focus! Looks wonderful with this big black frame!
Excellent done!
Best regards!
Lili

HelloDawn

I like the colors pov dof excllent details well presented and composed photo excllent work

TFS Kyle

Hello Dawn
you are making my selection for YOUR presentation so hard for me!
I really like this one so far... but.. I really like the one with your fairytale!
This shot is really pretty and deserves to be printed and framed... oh for me as a gift? SURE! lol

Tricia

sorry cold meds are kicking in today!

Personally I don't like what the Radial blur did. would like to see a WS without it before I judge it's effect. Longer lens and bigger F-stop on a single flower that is isolate from the others. Another thought - can you turn down the radial blur filter?

Dan

Very effective Dawn. Lovely colours and excellent focus on that one poppy. TFS,
David

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  • Silke Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2847 W: 263 N: 5948] (23592)
  • [2008-01-30 2:24]
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The blurring of the BG flowers is expertly done and really makes the foreground poppy stand out. Great work
What's this about panic???

TFS
silke

I think we will not get any winter in Holland this year, again. So I hope it will be spring soon. Even more when I see this kind of pictures.

Well done, Dawn.

Best regards,

Don

Don't know about that.
I really find the BG distracting. Like there was too much movement and it takes the view from the main subject.
Still a very good experiment.
Pierre

Hello Dawn,
This really looks beautiful.
The colors are very eye catching in this photo. TFS
Vandana
later

  • Great 
  • nova Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2735 W: 263 N: 864] (8653)
  • [2008-01-30 20:03]

I love this one Dawn! The blury background is so effective and so beautiful here! I feel like being in a dream! Excellent cpmposition with the yellow flower in focus.Excellent black frame! Very well done!
Michel

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  • jawa Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1372 W: 0 N: 1] (12003)
  • [2008-02-04 6:45]

Hi Dawn
very nice flower photo in a good focus and colour.
Gr Jos

Hi Dawn !
you have a stunner here. The framing also helps and give it a well deserved prescence !
Well done. Best regards, Daniel

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  • puffy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1791 W: 128 N: 3006] (16617)
  • [2008-02-07 1:51]
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Hello my friend, is not all out of focus is it? :P I can see those tiny details (hairs) of the stoke of the flowers, very nice pp work, make it look more dreamy like ...well done.

Cheers,
Sweety

Hi Dawn.
Soooo beautiful!
The softness of this image is very touching.
It's a splendid success!
...How I would like to have taken this so beautiful image!
TFS & Cheer!!!
Dany :-)

Hi Dawnie

Simply beautiful! Love the big chunky frame surrounding the bright colours. Awesome work neighbour!

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