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Long forgotten 3
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Copyright: Sue Way (sway) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 89 W: 2 N: 26] (347)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-08-07
Categories: Architecture
Exposure: f/8, 1/125 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2005-08-10 1:10
Viewed: 822
Points: 36
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Yet again! I have photographed the old house again. This time I have taken everyones comments into consideration.

I hope you like my final photo of this house.

PP I selected the sky and altered brightness and contrast to make the sky a little more dramatic.

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To LuciG: Long forgotten 3sway 1 09-09 04:29
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Hello Sue,
Nice work. The sky is almost too bright on the right but it makes as a lighting going from right to left so it looks fine to me.
What a level of details. The house has an excellent definition.
I believe the ships haven't forgotten this house but you may have forgotten one ship alone hiding behind the translucent frame. Pooooooor ship!
All in all it makes a very calm and smooth photograph.
Thanks for sharing Sue and see you later on TL.
-Remi

hi Sue ,
great photo.very nice view and colours..well done

Onur

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  • Lotus Gold Star Critiquer [C: 74 W: 0 N: 7] (262)
  • [2005-08-10 2:45]

Superbe photo, de toute beauté, bravo !

i liked part 2, but i definitely prefer this. this version has 'life' in it.. :) love the colors! prolly coz i like blue skies...

great job!

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  • c41 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 99 W: 21 N: 0] (0)
  • [2005-08-10 4:25]

Sue this is a big improvement on the last one, well done i like the contrast between the grass and the clouds.

Love the shot, composition is great and the mood sets the photo.

Well done.

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  • jajko Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 49 W: 13 N: 11] (168)
  • [2005-08-10 9:08]

Hi Sway!
great work. libing colours and beauty contrasts between grass and sky.
good POV and nice frame.

regards, lukasz

Belle composition. Les moutons aménent une abiance buccolique à ce paysage sobre mais efficace.

Yes Sue, this is wonderful!!! you are improving for sure!! :)
cheers from Hungary
ToM

C'est surement celle que je préfère de la série Long forgotten, mais peut-être y en aura-t-il d'autre.

In one word Sue:
Fantastic shot !

TFS
John

its a trully new zealand view,
savana and sheep are the famous landmark, like we see on travell brochures arround the world :-)
Thankyou for sharing Sue.

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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3274 W: 268 N: 7754] (33070)
  • [2005-09-05 6:08]

Yes, good job! You are getting better. Little by little we pick things up and want to do things better. Some nice lamb chops up there on the hill too.
Well done.

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  • LuciG Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1286 W: 153 N: 729] (8681)
  • [2005-09-08 6:35]
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Hi Sue!

J'ai commenté la première car elle me semblait particulièrement intéressante! Maintenant, avec toutes les idées et conseils réunis, cela ne peut que devenir un vrai chef d'oeuvre!
La sensation est la même, mais les couelurs sont particulièrement vives, et le cadrage parfait!

Bravo!
Luci


P.S Par ce travail, tu démontres tout l'intêret de ce site, travailler, apprendre et partager ensemble! Quel beau message ... Merci!

Hello Sue,
I just discoverd your posts on TL.
This picture is so typical for NZ to me.
Hard to imagine the daily life of the first settlers who cut the trees, built a hut and started breeding sheep. I like this one much better than the one you sent before. Well done.
Thomas

Lovely composition, Sue! I like it very much. The sky is awesome! I only thought the grass might be nicer if it were slightly lighter - so I tried a workshop.
Kind regards,
Annelies

Very nice shot Sue. Well composed, good point of view. Nice colors...
Tomasz

Hi Sue,

I like this photo very much, this old house has such a deserted, barren atmosphere....well done! The composition is superb!

Ivana

hello, sue
somewhere between a friendly and a sad desolation... I like the lack of perspective here, the whole world is just stopping at this close, green-gray horizon. forgotten by who? sheep don't care.
thanks
regards,
cal

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