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Happy Birthday Treklens 5 Today


Happy Birthday Treklens 5 Today
Photo Information
Copyright: Steven Parata (superaudio) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 236 W: 85 N: 177] (4526)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-03
Categories: Daily Life, Nature, Decisive Moment, Abstract, Mood
Camera: Sony Alpha DSLR A300, Tamron 18-200mm f/3.5-6.3 XR Di-II LD As
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Friday Theme 2009/04/02 "Happy 5th Birthday TL" [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2009-04-03 0:32
Viewed: 208
Points: 16
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Here's my entry for this Friday's Theme
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Discussions
ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To otherpete: Thanks for viewing :)superaudio 1 04-13 13:17
To pozaru: Thanks for viewing and feedback V :)superaudio 1 04-06 02:59
To teamill: Thanks for viewing Trudy :)superaudio 1 04-03 13:49
To jjcordier: Thanks JJ :)superaudio 1 04-03 13:49
To Dawn: You're right Dawn, I saw the T but missed the L :)superaudio 1 04-03 01:11
To Janice: Thanks Janice :)superaudio 1 04-03 01:10
To mikolaj_cava: Thanks Mikolaj, glad you like it :)superaudio 1 04-03 01:00
To Royaldevon: Thanks Bev appreciate your feedback :)superaudio 1 04-03 00:57
To Sharpshooter: Thanks for viewing and feedback Scott :)superaudio 1 04-03 00:44
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Critiques [Translate]

Very nicely composed shot Steven, the shrubs and branches suit very well. Great clarity, good choice for the theme.

TFS,
Scott.

Hello Steven,

This is a beautiful study of the deserted beach with some of its natural features, composed so carefully that it is true art.
The positioning of the dead wood creates a dramatic stance, sharply focussed along with the grass & textured sand. The oof b/g gives it superb context.
I do like this!

Kind regards,
Bev :-)

Hello Steven! Very sophisticated art work. Wonderful composition. Perfect shot. Good luck!

Nicely composed Steven, with the driftwood piled up against the sand. The horizon is a bit tilted though.
I like the inclusion of the grass growing there too,
TFS
Janice

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  • Dawn Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1139 W: 100 N: 3357] (17508)
  • [2009-04-03 1:04]
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Hi Steven, I see a "T" and an "L" in this formation of the drift wood...bet you scanned every beach in the North Island for that! lol.

Nice work, and Happy birthday Treklens.

Cheers
Dawn

Steven
Avec un peu d'imagination, on peut voir un T, un L et même un 5.....bien joué!
Amicalement
JJ

Steven, very nicely observed, composed and taken. Love the detail in the sand - very sharp. Great shot.
Trudy

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3556 W: 737 N: 2391] (18998)
  • [2009-04-06 2:44]
  • [+]

Very beautiful and moody shot.


thanks,
v

Nice composition and a very inviting image

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